Tom Godwin's short story "The Cold Equations" opens with suspense because
the reader immediately knows an unidentified being is in the ship with pilot
Barton. However, the conflict does not develop until the end
of the second page when the stowaway emerges from the closet to reveal she is a
girl. Barton was expecting a man and, as an Emergency Dispatch Ship (EDS)
pilot, is very accustomed to seeing men die in the new
frontier and very ready to jettison the male stowaway to ensure the many lives
he is heading to the planet Woden to save are indeed saved. His realization the
stowaway is a young girl, innocent of the fierce new frontier laws,
creates significant internal conflict within Barton.
However, based on the details Godwin explains concerning circumstances of
distance and travel in the new frontier, even by the second page of the story
when the conflict is revealed, the reader knows the story can
only have one possible outcome--the girl must
die to ensure the lives of many others are saved. Specifically, Godwin
informs the reader that, since the galaxy is so spread out, the distance
between the different colonies and explorers had caused a significant problem.
Large hyperspace cruisers were built to transport colonists and explorers and
to visit the colonies to check up on them, but the cruisers were too large and
expensive to be able to make unscheduled emergency stops at colonies when need
arose. Therefore, officials needed to design small, fast ships that could
deliver emergency supplies and aid, but the ships were too small to be able to
carry any more than the amount of fuel necessary to reach their emergency
destinations. An extra person on-board the ship would burn up too much
carefully calculated fuel supply, rendering it impossible for the emergency
vehicle to reach its destination, costing the lives of many;
therefore, authorities issued the law that stowaways aboard EDS vehicles
"shall be jettisoned immediately following discovery."
Since the reader knows from the start of the story that, by the laws of
physics, one life must be sacrificed to save the lives many, the reader
can easily predict the outcome of the story and is
never surprised by the outcome. The reader is saddened, even heartbroken by the
outcome just as Barton is heartbroken, but never surprised.
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