Discussion Topic
The contribution of poetic devices and musicality to the overall meaning of Shakespeare's Sonnet 116
Summary:
In Sonnet 116, Shakespeare's use of poetic devices like metaphor and personification, along with the musicality created by iambic pentameter and rhyme, underscores the theme of steadfast, unchanging love. The rhythmic flow and vivid imagery accentuate the idea that true love remains constant despite any obstacles or the passage of time.
How do the poetic devices in Shakespeare's Sonnet 116 contribute to its overall meaning?
Let me not to the marriage of true minds
Admit impediments. Love is not love
Which alters when it alteration finds,
Or bends with the remover to remove:
O no; it is an ever-fixed mark,
That looks on tempests, and is never shaken;
It is the star to every wandering bark,
Whose worth's unknown, although his height be taken.
Love's not Time's fool, though rosy lips and cheeks
Within his bending sickle's compass come;
Love alters not with his brief hours and weeks,
But bears it out even to the edge of doom.
If this be error and upon me proved,
I never writ, nor no man ever loved.
The first rhetorical/poetic device that jumps out is Shakespeare's use of antanaclasis, which is repeating a word or phrase with a different meaning, as in "love is not love" (which changes when it gets the chance). The way he uses it here, it seems--at least at the end of line 2--to present a paradox: How can love not be love? Shakespeare uses enjambment, where lines are not end-stopped but flow onto the next line, to create momentary paradox or confusion (or as my Shakespeare prof put it long ago, "To make your mind turn cartwheels"). The confusion is quickly cleared up when he continues the thought on the next sentence, though.
The next two sentences use polyptoton, where one word is repeated in different grammatical forms. To wit: Love does not "[alter] when it alteration finds, / Or [bend] with the remover to remove." Alters/alteration and remover/remove are different uses of the same word. All of these are forms of repetition of basic ideas, but the use of the same word to mean different things or using the same stem word in different forms has a poetic, almost musical pleasure to it. It also forces your mind to pause and work out the nuances in meaning.
In the next four sentences, he uses metaphor to help describe what love is to him: it is "a star," which was used until very recent times to guide ships, an "ever-fixed mark" that is above worldly storms and is never shaken. It is, in other words, an unshakable thing, above petty troubles. True love, then, lies in the mind and does not "admit impediments" (allow obstacles to interfere).
Next, he personifies Love, saying it isn't "Time's fool" (thereby personifying Time, as well, as though the two are human adversaries). Time carries the proverbial sickle (a tool used to cut wheat) of Father Time, and Time can eventually take the "rosy lips and cheeks" of youth, but Love is not subject to this, either.
He continues the personification with the next two lines, saying that Love isn't affected by the passing of time; it remains constant--like the star he compared it to earlier--even unto "the edge of doom," or death.
Shakespeare is also big on alliteration, which is the repetition of (usually) consonant sounds in a sentence or more, usually at the beginning of words and emphasized syllables. Alliteration creates the effect of sound imitating ideas; it is music in words (think of it as another form of "rhyme," if you like). (For example, when Macbeth is talking about killing Duncan, he says, "If the assassination / Could trammel up the consequence, and catch / With his surcease success," he comes across sounding like the snake he is.)
Thus, when in Sonnet 116 Shakespeare writes "Let me not to the marriage of true minds / Admit impediments," he emphasizes the "m" sound. Not only does this have a pleasing, musical affect, but it is a sound we often associate with pleasure; when you take a bite of a delicious cookie, you probably say, "Mmmmm" (because your mouth is full, but it tastes good). He uses alliteration elsewhere in the poem, most notably when he speaks of how rosy lips and cheeks under "Time's bending sickle's compass come," the "k" sound almost onomatopoeic in how they cut the air.
The second line uses caesura, a complete pause in the middle of a line. The effect of this in music--and what is poetry but music with words?--is to produce a moment of anticipation, thus emphasizing what follows. Shakespeare thus pauses dramatically before he launches into his explanation of what love really is.
He also uses slant rhyme three times: love/remove, come/doom, and proved/loved. Slant rhyme is also known as "imperfect rhyme," among other things, and imperfection is part of the message: Shakespeare doesn't say or pretend that love is perfect--only that it rises above the petty problems couples have and is steadfast, even until death.
How does musicality contribute to the meaning of Shakespeare's sonnet 116?
Sonnet 116, also known by its first line "Let me not to the marriage of true minds," is one of Shakespeare's most famous sonnets. Shakespeare's sonnets usually twist and turn, often appearing different by the end of their lines than they did at the beginning. Shakespeare's wit is usually subversive, but in Sonnet 116 his prose is clear, honest and loyal.
There are a few ways that Shakespeare uses musicality to evoke the meaning in Sonnet 116. Through assonance, Shakespeare reveals beautiful, whole and open sounds. If you examine the vowels in the first five lines, you will notice a repeated use of long sounds, such as the "oo" in remove, "ai" in minds, and the fun diphthong in alteration. These sounds create an image of a speaker who is in love. It feels as if the speaker is almost sighing over the person they speak about in the sonnet. Also, the alliteration in the sonnet speaks volumes. Shakespeare uses B, P, V, D and T often, which are all placed at the front of the mouth. What do lovers often use? Their lips! Shakespeare demands you use your lips when speaking this sonnet.
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