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The impact of word choice on the emotional tone of "She Walks in Beauty."

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In "She Walks in Beauty," word choice significantly impacts the emotional tone by emphasizing purity, tranquility, and admiration. Words like "tender," "peace," and "innocent" create a serene and reverent mood, highlighting the subject's inner and outer beauty. This careful selection of words evokes a sense of calm and deep appreciation in the reader.

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How does word choice affect the emotional impact of "She Walks in Beauty"?

This small masterpiece by Byron could be considered a textbook guide to writing poetically as well as, as is usual in Byron, naturally and almost conversationally.

The first line, stating that "She walks in beauty" (italics added) instead of simply stating that "she is beautiful" or "she possesses beauty," suggests a kind of higher dimension into which the poet's love has entered, above the cold earthly world. Similarly, the comparison of her to "night" rather than "day" implies some degree of mystery about her. It's too ordinary, Byron seems to be saying, to employ the usual means of describing a beautiful woman as being "bright as day" or with a similar phrase. The "night" connotes something more interesting and possessing a deeper attraction.

In the second stanza, the characterization of her "nameless grace" implies something exceeding one's ability to describe it—a descriptive adjective is beyond the poet's ability. Also, in...

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saying "one shade the more, one ray the less," the poet is suggesting that both shade and light are generated from within his love, not granted to her externally—since we have already pictured her walking "in the night." "Raven tress," though perhaps sounding somewhat conventionally poetic, also contributes to theconnotation of that which is above the ordinary, above earth-bound human nature.

The last stanza, of course, is a kind of summation, and it seems the least striking poetically of the three. "The tints that glow," however, because this is simply an unusual way of getting across the idea of the radiance of his beloved's face, again impresses the reader with a suggestion of a magical quality, leading up to the beloved's "mind at peace with all below / A heart whose love is innocent!" The central point about his beloved's character comes at the very close and seems to tie the entire poem together into a single thought.

"She Walks in Beauty" demonstrates a recurring feature of Byron's verse: his ability to establish an almost conversational tone and simultaneously—through suggestion and the appropriate use of specialized, poetic language—to give an impression of transcendent beauty and divinity in women and in human beings overall.

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How does word choice affect the emotional impact of "She Walks in Beauty"?

In this poem, Byron consistently uses words with positive connotations to create an idealized picture of a perfect woman, inside and out. The woman is described as having dark hair and bright eyes, being "all that’s best of dark and bright." Her beauty is "tender" and has a "nameless grace." Her face is "serenely sweet," showing that she is "pure." Other words used to describe her include "soft," "calm," "glow," "goodness," "peace," and "love."

All of these words paint a positive image untainted by any hint of negativity. Even darkness, often used as a negative term, is here incorporated into the vision of the woman's perfect beauty through her "raven tresses" and the idea that she merges the perfect balance of dark and light into her lovely form.

We might also note that, especially as the poem proceeds, the adjectives describing the woman become increasingly abstract. The poem starts out with a concrete metaphor that compares her dark-haired beauty to "cloudless climes and starry skies," but as the poem progresses, the metaphor is replaced with statements, such as that her "mind" is at "peace" and her "love" is "innocent." The increasing abstraction suggests that the poet is increasingly projecting onto her physical beauty a moral goodness he imagines and longs to find in her rather than what he has experienced. Nevertheless, we as readers most likely come away with warm emotions about this ideal woman.

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