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Why does the author of "The Shawl" provide minimal setting details?

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The author of "The Shawl" provides minimal setting details to focus on the characters' emotional experiences and allow readers to fill in the gaps with their knowledge of the Holocaust. By offering sparse descriptions, such as the coldness and basic camp features, the narrative emphasizes the characters' suffering. The contrast between the bleak camp and the vibrant world beyond its fence further highlights the characters' despair and longing for freedom.

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Cynthia Ozicks’s short story "The Shawl," first published in 1980, depicts the suffering endured during the Holocaust by focusing on three characters—Rosa, Stella, and baby Magda—in two main settings: the march to a concentration camp and then life within the camp.

It is a short story of under 2,000 words, so every word is carefully chosen to create an image for the reader. As such, although there is not a lot of detail given with regards to the settings, there is sufficient information to gain a clear understanding of place and location. Furthermore, because there is so much evidence available about life in concentration camps, the writer knows that by giving some basic details, the reader can fill in the gaps themselves.

Of the walk to the camp, we know the characters “walked on the roads together,” and it was very cold (“the coldness of hell”)....

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We also read that there are villages along the side of the road. There are no other physical descriptions of place, but by describing the coldness and emotions of the characters, the reader can easily create an image in their head of what the scene looks like.

Descriptions of the camp itself are again fairly minimal, but other means are used to create a sense of place—by talking about the characters and what they are experiencing, we connect emotions and moods with the place. There is mention of the barracks, “the square outside the barracks, in the jolly light,” and “the roll call arena” where the people have to gather. We don’t really gain a sense of the objective size of the arena, but the following lines tell us all we need to know: “How far Magda was from Rosa now, across the whole square, past a dozen barracks, all the way on the other side!” The electric fence is another important detail, for both the setting and the plot, and again, there is little information, but there is enough to describe its relevance and impact. Thus setting details are incorporated into the telling of the story and resonate with their relevance to what happens.

Likewise, the more detailed description of what lies beyond the fence contrasted with what is contained within its perimeter is telling:

The sunheat murmured of another life, of butterflies in summer. The light was placid, mellow. On the other side of the steel fence, far away, there were green meadows speckled with dandelions and deep-colored violets; beyond them, even farther, innocent tiger lilies, tall, lifting their orange bonnets. In the barracks they spoke of “flowers,” of “rain”: excrement, thick turd-braids, and the slow stinking maroon waterfall that slunk down from the upper bunks, the stink mixed with a bitter fatty floating smoke that greased Rosa’s skin.

It reminds us of the past and gives hope for some kind of future, outside the current reality the women are experiencing. Similarly, in some ways, a main setting of the story could be understood as the shawl itself. This houses and holds the baby, outside and in, and creates a separate space, described in more detail, that to some extent exists outside of the rules of the camp.

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