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Shakespeare's diction choices in Romeo and Juliet

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Shakespeare's diction in Romeo and Juliet is characterized by poetic language, vivid imagery, and a mix of formal and informal speech. He uses puns, metaphors, and contrasts to convey the intensity of emotions and themes, such as love and conflict. This choice of diction enhances the dramatic impact and helps to define characters' personalities and social statuses.

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How does Shakespeare use diction in acts 4 and 5 of Romeo and Juliet?

Diction is a literary term meaning word choice. We all use diction, in the sense of choosing certain words rather than other words, whenever we speak or write. When literary critics talk about diction, they are thinking about how either specific word choices affect tone or make judgments. For example, calling a friend "fat" would be rude and negative, but "curvy" would be positive and more polite. Your diction, or choice of the word "fat" vs. "curvy" tells a reader or listener a great deal about your attitude towards the person. 

The first major distinction is between speech in prose and in verse. Shakespeare will sometimes use prose for ordinary or casual conversation, but often verse for more important or emotionally heightened passages.

In Act IV, Juliet, a young girl overcome by emotion, uses diction quite distinct from that of Friar Laurence , an older and far better educated...

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man. For example, look at Juliet's lines:

O shut the door! and when thou hast done so,
Come weep with me; past hope, past cure, past help!

Every single word in these two lines is a monosyllable. The syntactic units are short; the final "past, hope, past cure, past help" uses the rhetorical device of asyndeton, often recommended as a way of expressing strong emotion. 

Although Friar Laurence sympathizes with Juliet, his diction is far more moderate or measured:

It strains me past the compass of my wits:
I hear thou must, and nothing may prorogue it,
On Thursday next be married to this county.

He uses more ornate vocabulary ("compass", "prorogue"), and longer, more complex syntactic units, with a more balanced and complex clausal structure. His choice of words and syntax projects a more reflective character, less impulsive and more emotionally restrained than the young girl, as is appropriate to his age and priestly vocation. 

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What diction choices did Shakespeare make in Romeo and Juliet?

Diction refers to the specific word choices an author makes, and a writer's choices of words can help portray theme, style, and even tone. A theme is the subject matter that a piece of literature is about; style, particularly a writer's style, refers to the way in which an author describes "events, objects, and ideas" ("Defining Style"); and tone refers to the writer's attitude concerning the subject matter ("Tone vs. Mood"). The diction, meaning word choices, syntax, and other literary devices all come together to convey the writer's images, story, and ideas. Dr. Wheeler gives a good example of diction when he points out that a writer can choose to call a "rock formation" by a number of words, including "a stone, a boulder, an outcropping, a pile of rocks, a cairn, a mound, or even an 'anomalous geological feature'" (Dr. Wheeler, "Literary Terms and Definitions: D"). Each of these terms have different connotations, create different images in the reader's head, and help to portray a completely different attitude. Any piece of literature, especially Shakespeare's Romeo and Juliet, is full of different diction choices, and all you have to do is choose a particular scene or speech to analyze in order to zero in on the word choices and see exactly what Shakespeare is conveying through the word choices. Using a dictionary will help you with this project, even for words you are already familiar with, because a dictionary will help you see connotations you are unaware of, which can help you better see Shakespeare's possible intentions in the diction choices.

Let's take Prince Escalus's speech in the opening scene as an example. Even the very first line is full of word choices that convey interesting meaning. The word "subject" is an interesting choice of diction because the word subject can refer to people who are ruled by a king or government, but it can also refer to a dominant theme (I.i.77; Collins English Dictionary). Hence this one word "subject" addressed to the warring Montagues and Capulets shows us that, not only should they be under Prince Escalus's rule but are failing to do so out of rebellion, but also that the feud between the Montagues and Capulets, especially their unrelenting, unfounded hatred for each other, is the central theme of the play. The word "enemies" is also an interesting word choice because, not only does it refer to hostile groups of people, it first refers to people who hate each other and act in ways to harm each other, which is a perfect portrayal of the Capulets and Mongtagues (77; Random House Dictionary). In addition, the diction choice for the phrase "enemies to peace" is also very interesting because, not only does the term peace juxtapose the word enemies, the entire phrase further portrays Shakespeare's message that the Montagues and Capulets are not just enemies to each other, they are enemies of harmony, friendship, lawfulness, and order, meaning that they hate all of these things (77).

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