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Analyze the structure, theme, and use of metaphor in "TV" by Iain Crichton Smith.

TV by Iain Crichton Smith
This is your rectangle of narratives.
This is the voice that saves you from silence.
This is your scroll of perpetual images.
Listen, is there time for the poem to grow
in this incessant noise?
Is there time for that which is secret
to blossom?
Privacy must be paid for.
The blessed room, the refuge, the well, must be paid for.
When teh comedians fade like ghosts grimacing in water
when the clowns remove their eyes,
the silence must be paid for, like water,
and the cell be precious
with silence, with fragrance, with the stone of privacy.
For the din is dreadful, the confusion of narratives is merciless,
the screen is vicious, it is a stadium of assassinations.
We need the bubble of our own secret recesses,
the scent of clear water.
The narratives overwhelm us, they have no meaning, they have no connection with each other
We need the sacred light of the imagination.
We need the sacred cell and the pen that lies on the table.
We need the paper, that cool rectangle of white.
For one is heaven, and sometimes the other is hell,
the world of frustrated murderers, teh advertisments, the elegies without echo,
the questioners bending down to the bandaged ones,
the smiling humourless clowns.
The narratives overwhelm us, we need the white paper, unclouded,
we need in that furious hubbub a space for our names,
the sanity of prudent distance.

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"TV" by Iain Crichton Smith is structured in free verse, lacking regular rhyme or meter. The poem explores the theme of television's overwhelming noise and distraction, hindering creativity and quiet reflection. The poet contrasts TV's "rectangle of narratives" with the "white paper, unclouded," necessary for imaginative thought. Metaphors like "scroll of perpetual images" and "stone of privacy" highlight the clash between the incessant narratives of TV and the need for personal, creative space.

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The first step in poetry analysis is analyzing structure. "TV" is in free verse. This means there are no stanzas. It may be correct to speak of free verse poetic paragraphs, but it is generally not correct to speak of free verse poetic stanzas (of, course, since it is free verse, there may be exceptions). As an example, Lines 6, 7, and 8 may be called two poetic paragraphs:

Is there time for that which is secret
to blossom?
Privacy must be paid for.

By way of contrast, here are two stanzas from a rhyming, quatrain Frost poem, "Late Walk":

When I go up through the mowing field,
The headless aftermath,
Smooth-laid like thatch with the heavy dew,
Half closes the garden path.

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Half closes the garden path.

And when I come to the garden ground,
The whir of sober birds
Up from the tangle of withered weeds
Is sadder than any words

Since "TV" is free verse, there is no rhyming nor is there metrical rhythm, such as iambic pentameter (five feet of unstressed stressed ('/) rhythm). There may be rhythm and even repetition, but it is usually a conversational cadence and not a set meter.

The theme is expressed early in the poem in lines 4 and 5: "is there time for the poem to grow / in this incessant noise?" The poetic speaker, which may or may not be a poet's own voice (though in this case the persona is accepted as Smith's own voice), is protesting the overwhelming noise and psychic clutter our modern lives assail us with, specifically, through the television shows some of us drown our quietude in, that "rectangle of narratives," Speaking for poets, the speaker asserts the TV overwhelms the poet's thoughts and privacy. The poet needs time, space, quiet to find the words of poetic expression. This theme is confirmed at the end of the poem: "The narratives overwhelm us, we need the white paper, unclouded,"

The overriding metaphor is one quoted above: "rectangle of narratives." A metaphor compares two things are that really not alike by relating a feature or quality of one to the other. A metaphor does not use the words "like" or "as" in the comparison though a simile does use these words. An example of metaphor is a comparison between a book and a schoolhouse. A schoolhouse may be said to be a book of life (feature: knowledge) or a book may be said to be one's private schoolhouse (feature: learning).

Smith makes a comparison in this metaphor between poetic narratives and TVs narratives. Narratives tell stories: poems tell stories, and TV shows tell stories. Therefore, TV is "your rectangle of narratives" as opposed to the narratives of poetry found on "white paper, unclouded," with that "furious hubbub [of] a space for our names."

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Can you help analyze "TV" by Iain Crichton Smith?

This is your rectangle of narratives.

This is the voice that saves you from silence.

This is your scroll of perpetual images.

Listen, is there time for the poem to grow

in this incessant noise?

Is there time for that which is secret

to blossom?

Privacy must be paid for.

The blessed room, the refuge, the well, must be paid for.

When the comedians fade like ghosts grimacing in water

when the clowns remove their eyes,

the silence must be paid for, like water,

and the cell be precious

with silence, with fragrance, with the stone of privacy.

For the din is dreadful, the confusion of narratives is merciless,

the screen is vicious, it is a stadium of assassinations.

We need the bubble of our own secret recesses,

the scent of clear water.

The narratives overwhelm us, they have no meaning, they have no connection with each other

We need the sacred light of the imagination.

We need the sacred cell and the pen that lies on the table.

We need the paper, that cool rectangle of white.

For one is heaven, and sometimes the other is hell,

the world of frustrated murderers, the advertisements, the elegies without echo,

the questioners bending down to the bandaged ones,

the smiling humourless clowns.

The narratives overwhelm us, we need the white paper, unclouded,

we need in that furious hubbub a space for our names,

the sanity of prudent distance.

Poetry analysis covers everything from structure to theme to poetic techniques. Let's see if we can get you started on the right track. In "TV," the element of structure is certainly the most complicated poetic device. In the structure, rhyme is omitted though rhythm is complicated.

The structure is essentially built on the dactylic metrical rhythm [DA da da: STRESSED unstressed unstressed], though it has so many variations to the meter that it feels more like unmetered, unrhymed free verse. For example, the first line sets up the dactylic rhythm with stress on this voice and nar-. The dactylic meter is clearly distinguishable, though the second foot elides -tangle of so that it is two beats instead of three:

This' is your / rec' -tang -le_of / nar' -ra -tives. [(rk'tng-gl)]

The essential--though not invariable--meter has three feet, rendering the underlying metrical rhythm dactylic trimeter. Compare this to "in this incessant noise?"

in this' / in -ces' / -sant noise'?

This line shifts to iambic (da DA) trimeter. When you scan the rest of the lines to find the myriad variations, look for the word stress on key words; you'll use your dictionary to confirm word stress as we did with rectangle above. For example, before scanning the following line, you must find the word stress for dreadful, confusion, narratives, merciless since the meter cannot oppose prescribed English word stress:

For the din' is dread'ful, the confus'ion of nar'ratives is mer'ciless,

The theme is fairly clearly laid out for us with very little (if any) ambiguity: television, though having friendly qualities, is loud and a distraction and a hindrance to needed moments of solitude, quietude, and creativity. I think we'd all agree to both points! These are some lines that point out the two parts of the theme:

This' is the voice' that saves' you from si' lence.

Lis' ten, is there time' for the poem' to grow

Is there time' for that' which is se'-cret
to blos'som?

We need' the bub'-ble of our own se'-cret reces'-ses,

In another point on structure, Smith employs an old, yet often overlooked, English poetic technique of employing a pause as an unstressed beat: this descends from the caesura of Old English poetry that began in the oral tradition. The comma after listen creates the second unstressed beat through the comma's pause. It also then provides the transition from dactyl to anapest [da da DA], with an interesting addition of an iambic fourth meter, creating tetrameter:

Lis' ten, [pause] / is there time' / for the poem' / to grow'

Poetic techniques are represented by a large number of metaphors. Metaphor: comparisons between two unlike things, without using as or like, that give a vivid mental image of the qualities of the one less familiar thing:

rectangle of narratives.
scroll of perpetual images.
the stone of privacy
the cool rectangle of white

Imagery is also present with some interesting descriptions appealing to the physical senses, as in "the scent" of water, "the din" of TV's noise, the "fragrance" of the "sacred cell."

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