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How can this analysis of Curley's Wife in Of Mice and Men be improved?

Thereafter Steinbeck uses the phrase like “leaned against the door frame” and “put her hands behind her back” to shows the danger just by her body language and her stance at the barn door. Which shows a woman who appears confident and a tease, from this I can infer that Curley’s Wife is very confident in seeking men’s attention and she is trying to get the attention of George and Lennie.

Moreover Steinbeck foreshadows danger by the quote “sunshine in the doorway was cut off” This quote is really metaphoric and suggest men's in the ranch losing hope.

Steinbeck relates the colour red to Curley’s wife repeatedly. Steinbeck does this because the colour red signifies danger as well as desire and passion. This reveals a lot about Curley’s wife character because it suggests how dangerous she is. This could be further evidence that Steinbeck disrespects women.

George and Lennie meet Curley’s wife at the barn for the first time. George and Lennie react differently toward her, this shown by Lennie who thinks she is “purty” but also George who sees danger. George foresees that Lennie's attraction to feminine softness will again cause trouble, and threaten their dream of a farm. The word “purty”

Steinbeck shows Curley’s Wife as an overdressed dangerous ‘jailbait’ which the men might admire but see that she is danger to them. This can only mean a promiscuous underage girl who can get men sentenced to prison on a felony count of statutory rape. She is overly made up and overly dressed for the ranch setting, suggesting that she looks like a young girl who is trying to look older and attractive.

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This analysis of Curley's Wife could be enhanced by improving grammatical accuracy, such as ensuring subject-verb agreement and avoiding sentence fragments. Clarifying the symbolic use of red in relation to Curley's Wife and expanding on the accusation of misogyny would strengthen the argument. Including specific textual examples and a conclusion would also enhance coherence and depth. The analysis effectively identifies key details but requires polishing for academic rigor.

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Grammatically, the piece could use some work. For example, avoid starting sentences with "which" in a formal essay. Starting a sentence with "which" tends to lead to an incomplete sentence, and while this might be okay in an informal piece, it is unacceptable in an academic paper.

I also think you should expand upon the part where you claim the use of the color red in marking Curley's wife as dangerous and therefore her portrayal as misogynistic, as accusing a story and/or author of misogyny is a pretty big deal. (If you need more fodder for such an argument, you could also bring up how the character is never given a proper name. She is only ever referred to as Curley's wife.)

I would also suggest you put in a proper conclusion, or at least a proper closing statement, emphasizing that Curley's wife is symbolic of danger. As it...

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stands, your ending feels abrupt.

Overall, though you bring out a lot of great details here. It all just needs polishing.

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This analysis could be improved grammatically in a few places.  The subject and verb agreement is not always correct.  "Steinbeck uses the phrase "leaned against the door frame" and . . . to show."  You wrote "shows."

For the next sentence start it by saying "This shows . . . " instead of "which."

Put a period after "tease." Then a new sentence. 

Second paragraph.  Either get rid of or explain better how the quote foreshadows.  The quote is not a metaphor.  Metaphors make a comparison between two things.  The quote may be symbolic, but it is not a metaphor. 

Third paragraph.  You've said that the color red is repeatedly associated with Curley's wife, but no specific examples are given. You've said what the color red indicates, but a few quotes from the text that show Curley's wife and red would do a lot for support. 

4th paragraph -- the last 3 words are not a sentence.  Finish the thought or delete it.  The content of that paragraph is fine. 

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