Discussion Topic
Imagery and figures of speech in "A Narrow Fellow in the Grass"
Summary:
Emily Dickinson's poem "A Narrow Fellow in the Grass" uses vivid imagery and figures of speech to depict a snake. The poem employs personification, describing the snake as a "narrow fellow," and uses metaphors like "a spotted shaft" to illustrate its appearance. Dickinson's use of sensory details, such as "a tighter breathing / And Zero at the Bone," evokes the reader's uneasy reaction to encountering the snake.
What figures of speech are present in the poem 'A Narrow Fellow in the Grass'?
There are many figures of speech in this poem. Even the central phrase, a "narrow fellow," can be described in various terms. First, this is an example of circumlocution—Dickinson does not say outright that she is talking about a snake, but rather, uses more words than necessary to hint euphemistically at this fact. Next, it is an example of personification—the snake is not literally a "fellow," nor does he "ride" as a man might ride a horse; Dickinson is ascribing human characteristics to an animal. This personification continues in Dickinson's use of "he" and "him" pronouns to refer to the snake, and in the idea of having "met" him. This is a verb we usually only use about other humans.
There is also a simile in the second stanza: the grass "divides as with a comb." This creates a very evocative mental image of the grass being neatly parted...
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by the snake's passage through it, like a comb parting hair.
A further metaphor, "Nature's people," is used to describe other animals—this, too, is a form of personification. Remember that personification is a type of metaphor, although of course many examples of metaphor are not also examples of personification.
What are some common imagery examples in the poem "A Narrow Fellow in the Grass"?
Most people, when happening upon a snake in the grass, are startled. But note that in the first stanza, the speaker calls the snake a "fellow"; this is an innocuous term for a boy or a man. The speaker personifies the snake, making it seem less threatening.
In the second stanza, the speaker uses a simile to describe the snake. The snake is the comb dividing the grass (hair). The grass parts, and we can see the "spotted Shaft" (the snake). As the snake moves on, the grass closes "at your Feet / And opens further on -." The grass opens and closes as the snake makes its way through. It would be startling to see a snake move through your feet, but the image of the grass parting and closing seems almost peaceful.
In the third stanza, we learn that the speaker is male. And in the fourth stanza, he describes how he has encountered a snake multiple times before. He notes how he thought the snake was a whip. When he stooped to pick up the whip, he realized it was a snake as it moved away. Again, we have an image of something threatening but innocuous. A whip is dangerous but inanimate. The snake might be dangerous, but it moves away.
In the final stanza, the speaker says he's never met a snake (by himself or with others) without feeling some degree of fear. And in some cases, it is extreme fear, as he's chilled to the bone ("Zero at the Bone").
Dickinson mostly avoids any words that overtly call to mind phallic comparisons and/or references to the evil serpent in Biblical literature. That doesn't mean that these cannot be involved in reader interpretations. In the story of the Garden of Eden, the snake was friendly but actually something to be feared. The phallic/sexual innuendo suggests a similar dichotomy of conquest and pleasure via seduction. By avoiding overt allusion to these images, Dickinson might have been addressing sexuality or seduction in a covert way. On the other hand, this poem is about the beauty and power of nature: something to admire and fear.
Imagery is the use of words by an author that evoke a certain image in the mind of the reader. Common imagery is the use of similar images, or related images, throughout a piece of writing.
In this poem, nature imagery - references to the grass, the acre, etc. - are common. Also, references to the human being - fellow, barefoot, bone - are also common.
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What are the common images in "A Narrow Fellow in the Grass"?
Checking out some of the scholarship eNotes provides on this poems validates ane exands upon Jamie’s insigtful response. According to one critic, the poem is on the one hand realisitic depicting that snake and as such a detailed and imaginative description of an encounter with nature, but the poem is also about “transformation” in viewing nature, which creates “a more woman-centered religion that incorporates a reverence for the things of the earth.” This view diminishes some of the violence and anxiety apparent in the poem, but affirms the system of symbolism that Jamie finds.
This is a sexual poem if you look at some of the symbols. There is the "spotted shaft" and the snake that "divides the grass as a comb"... references to the sexual organs and the act of intercourse.
However, the imagery is not positive. The use of the "snake" itself has overtones of biblical evil and the snake is traditionally associated with secretive and vile acts. Other descriptive words include "slither" and "scally" and I would argue out that the shaft (the penis) describe as "spotty" means that it is diseased in some way.