Discussion Topic
Poetic techniques and figurative language in Langston Hughes's "Mother to Son"
Summary:
In "Mother to Son," Langston Hughes uses an extended metaphor of a staircase to represent life's struggles, employing vivid imagery, such as "tacks" and "splinters," to convey hardships. The poem also features repetition with the phrase "Life for me ain't been no crystal stair," emphasizing perseverance. Additionally, Hughes uses colloquial language to create an authentic, conversational tone.
What examples of rhyme, rhythm, and alliteration are in Langston Hughes' "Mother to Son"?
The Langston Hughes's poem "Mother to Son" is written in free verse, so it has no formal rhyme scheme. However, there are occasional rhymes such as "stair" and "bare." The rhythm follows an informal pattern, as the poem is supposed to mimic dialogue--the way a mother would speak to her son. For example, the use of the words "ain't" and the phrase "a-climbin'" is colloquial in nature.
There are instances of alliteration, or the repetition of consonant sounds in words that are close together. For example, the lines "Bare./But all the time" repeat the "B" sound, and the line "Don't you set down on the steps" repeats the "s" sound. However, the poem makes more use of anaphora, or the repetition of words at the beginning of sentences, such as "And." The line "Life for me ain't been no crystal stair" is also repeated several times to give this idea emphasis. This poem mimics the way a person would speak, and it also includes an extended metaphor of a crystal stair--the easy path that the mother's life has definitely not followed in her hardscrabble existence.
Alliteration is when the initial consonant sound is repeated over and over. For example, think of all of your classic tongue-twisters (Peter Picked a Peck of Pickled Peppers); it is the "p" noise that is repeated over and over here. In "Mother to Son," I don't seen any good examples of alliteration. To be a good example, it would need to be several words, right after each other, at least in the same line. That doesn't really happen.
For rhyme, look to the third and seventh lines (stair/bare). The strongest of the three techniques is the rhythm. Read it out loud--it has a definite lilt and lyrical quality to it. The repetition, short phrases, dialect and metaphorical content all make the poem seem like a song or a nursery rhyme that a mother is singing to her son.
I hope that those thoughts helped; good luck!
What figurative language is used in Langston Hughes's "Mother to Son"?
The speaker employs a vernacular that would be common for a black mother in this historical context to use in speaking with her son. This accounts for the colorful language such as "I'se" and "kinder" that would be easily accessible for her son's understanding, which is the goal of her advice.
Assonance is the repetition of a vowel sound in a single line, such as in the line "’Cause you finds it’s kinder hard" (emphasis added). This long i sound slows down the line, forcing the son to pay close attention to this line. He may struggle and life might be hard, but he can't sit down now.
The symbolism of the bright crystal stair is juxtaposed with the mother's actual experience, symbolized by "the dark / Where there ain't been no light." These symbols of darkness represent the mother's struggles when she felt alone and isolated. The darkness symbolizes her own inner hopelessness in her situation—yet she has persisted. Although she could not find her way, she kept "turnin' corners," a symbol for making new choices that would take her to the next landing.
Caesura, which is an intentional pause within a line of poetry, is also strategically used after the opening word: "Well," the poem begins. This immediately engages readers, making this poem feel like a conversation that we have fallen into the middle of. This mother is employing a technique to get her son's attention (in my mind with a tone similar to "Let me tell you something...").
There are few lines which use enjambment; instead most lines end with a hard stop, forcing the reader (and son) to stop and reflect upon each obstacle with the mother. The shape of the poem itself becomes a metaphor in the end, its jagged shape of varying line lengths mirroring the harsh climb the mother has faced in her quest to continually climb over life's obstacles.
The main example of figurative language in Langston Hughes's poem "Mother to Son" is the central extended metaphor comparing the speaker's life to a staircase. The speaker of the poem, the titular mother addressing her son, expresses the hardships and struggles she has faced in her life through this metaphor of a staircase: "Life for me ain't been no crystal stair." A stair made of crystal is an image that calls to mind luxury and ease.
In contrast, the mother describes the staircase of her life as being full of splinters and broken boards, meaning she had to struggle far more to keep moving onwards and upwards than others around her. Each issue with the staircase that she describes, from patches without carpet to stretches of darkness, is in turn a metaphor for a hardship she has faced in her life. Despite how difficult the climb has been, the mother's inspirational message to her son is that he needs to keep going, saying:
Don’t you set down on the steps
’Cause you finds it’s kinder hard.
Don’t you fall now
"Mother" compares life to stairs, and contrasts her life (or stairs) against that of a "crystal stair," which, in this poem, becomes a symbol of luxury and ease. The smooth delicacy of crystal is contrasted with the rough textures that she has known in life:
Life for me ain't been no crystal stair.
It's had tacks in it,
And splinters,
And boards torn up,
And places with no carpet on the floor --
Bare.
"Tacks" and "splinters" indicate danger and pain. Torn boards signal dilapidation -- a sign of poverty -- while "places with no carpet" indicate discomfort. Notice the use of anaphora, or repetition, at the beginning of each line" with the continuous use of "and." Her suffering reads as a catalog which suddenly stops with the imagistic use of the word "bare." "Bare" refers literally to the absence of carpeting in this context, but also has connotative meaning: there was absence, perhaps also loneliness.
Nevertheless, she emphasizes the importance of persistence:
But all the time
I'se been a-climbin' on,
And reachin' landin's,
And turnin' corners,
And sometimes goin' in the dark
Where there ain't been no light.
She signals the shift from negative to positive with the use of "but." The dialect becomes starker here, signifying a lack of education and Southern origins. The poem may also address the migration of blacks from the South to Northern cities where their lives were easier, but still difficult.
The use of anaphora reappears with the repetition of "and." In this case, the anaphora draws attention to the movement of progress.
The next lines address "Son" in an imperative tone:
So boy, don't you turn back.
Don't you set down on the steps
'Cause you finds its kinder hard.
Don't you fall now --
For I'se still goin', honey,
I'se still climbin',
And life for me ain't been no crystal stair.
Again, she uses the metaphor of movement up a staircase to encourage her son's rightful direction in life. Setting down on the steps indicates giving up, while falling indicates making a move that misdirects one's progress, forcing one to start all over again.
Her use of the adverb "still" to modify "goin'" and "climbin'" indicates that age has not quelled her desire to have a better life. The second line of the poem is repeated at the end: "And life for me ain't been no crystal stair." Here, the line has a more positive meaning than it has on the first reading: it is less a description of hardship then of persistence and perseverance.
What are the metaphors and similes in the poem "Mother to Son" by Langston Hughes?
"Mother to Son," written by Langston Hughes, is written in the voice of a mother advising her son how life has been for her and how she has struggled. The whole poem is built around a metaphor of life as a staircase; the mother repeats at both the beginning and end of the poem that life "ain't been no crystal stair" for her—meaning that it has not been easy to navigate.
Instead, the "stair" of the mother's life has contained "tacks," "splinters," and "bare" places without carpet, indicating that she has suffered hardship. Metaphorically, however, she has "been a-climbin' on"—continuing despite the difficulties she has encountered—and there is a sense that she has achieved much. She has been offered respite by the "landin's" she has reached, enabling her to "turn corners." Sometimes, "there ain't been no light," and the mother finds herself "goin' in the dark." She does not mean that there literally is no light for her. Instead, she means that things have often seemed confusing and difficult and she has often felt unguided. In the end, however, she advises her son not to "set down on the steps" of life and to keep going as she has.
There are no similes in the poem.
Which poetic techniques are used in "Mother to Son" by Langston Hughes?
I can't find any examples of similes in the poem; similes are where you compare two things using the words "like" or "as." Something very similar though, is a metaphor--it is the exact same thing, but doesn't need the signal word of like or as. The entire poem is packed with metaphors, all centered around the main one of comparing life to a set of stairs that one must climb.
There are also no examples of personification, where you give inanimate objects human traits. For hyperbole, look for examples of extreme exaggeration. The mother is quite intense, and exaggerates; she compares her life to being in the dark, getting torn up and worn down, and filled with never-ending trial and sorrow. If there is satire, it is of a very serious sort, that comments on the hardships that black Americans had to go through in life. The mother's life had been very, very hard, and she passed that down to her son, warning him of the difficulties. Satire usually comments on society, making judgments about it.
For sound techniques, Hughes uses dialect, a bit of rhyming ("stair/bare,"), and repetition. Those are just a few examples of some of the techniques that you asked about. I hope that helps you get started; good luck!
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