(Critical Guide to British Fiction)

When the story opens, Samuel (Sam) and Henrietta (Henny) Pollit have long since stopped speaking to each other except to argue. Any information they must exchange is conveyed through notes or by using the children as go-betweens. Despite their numerous offspring, they have hated each other from the day they married. The conflict between them is the essential conflict of the novel.

The action covers several years in the Pollits’ lives. Louisa (Louie) is eleven and a half when the action begins and fourteen when the story ends. The impact of her parents’ differences on her life—on both her external world and the rich and tormented imaginative world that she creates as a buffer against the harsh realities of life in the Pollit home—is the major focus of the plot. Neither Sam nor Henny changes significantly during the course of the action, but there is significant growth and change in Louie.

When the story begins, the Pollits live in Tohoga House, a large, rambling estate which they rent from Henny’s well-to-do father, with the understanding that they will someday inherit the property. Sam works for the Department of Commerce, and the true complications of the plot begin when he is appointed a Special Field Commissioner and travels to Malaya with a team of Americans to spend nine months advising and studying the cultures of the Pacific.

Just before his departure, his sister, Bonnie, who lives with the Pollits and functions as a house servant, leaves the family. Henny demands that Sam provide a servant to help her with the children during his absence, a fight that leads to a rare sexual encounter (the Pollits have separate bedrooms) and, presumably, to the conception of the family’s last child, Charles Franklin, born the day after Sam returns from his visit to the Orient. The child’s paternity is later called into question by an anonymous note delivered to the Pollit home, and the true identity of the father is never clearly established.

The time in the Orient is very difficult for Sam. He finds that he cannot adjust to the climate, and he misses his children, who serve as a worshipful audience for the antics and preachings of the man they sometimes call, at his own suggestion, Sam-the-Bold. The months are equally difficult for the pregnant Henny, who must manage her cumbersome household with very little in the way of financial resources.

When Sam returns, the action picks up, and the main events of the novel all occur with relative speed. On the day of his welcome-home party, the news of old David Collyer’s death arrives just as Henny goes into labor. What is at first believed to be a good thing for the Pollits, the...

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