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Examples of tone in literature

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Examples of tone in literature include the humorous and satirical tone in Mark Twain's The Adventures of Huckleberry Finn, the dark and foreboding tone in Edgar Allan Poe's "The Tell-Tale Heart," and the optimistic and hopeful tone in Louisa May Alcott's Little Women. Tone conveys the author's attitude and sets the mood for the reader.

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Can you provide a literary example of tone from a specific writer's work?

A short story that toys with contrasting tones is Saki's "The Open Window."  This story-within-a-story involves a frame story in which Mr. Nuttel, who is recovering from a nervous breakdown, arrives in the country for a rest at Mrs. Sappleton's house.  While Mr. Nuttel's tone is polite all through his dialogues with the niece who is sent out to entertain him while he awaits the hostess, the niece, who is ironically name Vera, is a rebellious and disrespectful child.  However, she cloaks this disrespect in her seemingly polite language as she tells Framton,

My aunt will be down presently, Mr. Nuttel,...in the meantime you must try and put up with me.

Here she means the opposite since she finds this nervous little man silly.

 After ascertaining Framton's ignorance of the area, Vera launches into a tall tale about her aunt's "great tragedy" that happened three years ago.  She uses the open window, which suggests honesty, as the focal point of the story, saying that Mrs. Sappleton's son and husband never returned from a hunting trip after going out this large window.

This rebellious child feigns sorrow as she says,

'Poor aunt always thinks that they will come back some day, they and the little brown spaniel that was lost with them, and walk in at that window just as they used to do. Poor dear aunt, she has often told me how they went out, her husband with his white waterproof coat...Do you know, sometimes on still, quiet evenings like this, I almost get a creepy feeling that they will walk in through that window--'

She broke off with a little shudder.

In complete disrespect of the soon approaching Mrs. Sappleton, Vera continues her tall tale.  When Mrs. Sappleton does arrive she asks, with dramatic irony, "I hope Vera has been amusing you?"

The only one amused is this rebellious child who has disrespectfully mocked the sensitivity of Framton and the truth of Mrs. Sappleton who explains, then, that the men of her family will soon return from hunting and come in the open window in order to keep the rugs clean.

When the men do appear, the mischievous and ironic tone of Vera become apparent to the reader, but, unwittingly, Mrs. Sappleton and Mr. Framton have been made the butt of her rebellious tall-tale. Ignorant of this joke, Mrs. Sappleton says in a supercilious tone,

'A most extraordinary man, a Mr. Nuttel,..could only talk about his illnesses, and dashed off whithout a word of goobye or apology when you arrived. One whould think he had seen a ghost [more drmamatic irony].'

Vera--whose name belies who true nature--creates another fabrication, calmly saying,

'I expect it was the spaniel...he told me he had a horror of dogs...

Humorously, Saki concludes, "Romance at short notice was specialty."

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Here's the opening passage from The Catcher in the Rye (1951):

If you really want to hear about it, the first thing you'll probably want to know is where I was born, and what my lousy childhood was like, and how my parents were occupied and all before they had me, and all that David Copperfield kind of crap, but I don't feel like going into it, if you want to know the truth.

Salinger's tone here is defensive and sarcastic.  His first person narrator, Holden Caulfield, begins his confession with a conditional statement "If"--as if he really doesn't want to divulge any autobiographical information about himself.  As such, Holden is an unreliable narrator.  He also ends the statement this way, "if you want to know the truth."  Holden is guarded about his family life and past, and he resents other books that require readers to sympathize with its narrator, like David Copperfield by Charles Dickens.   Because he does not want us to pscyhoanalyze his "lousy childhood," Holden is likely hiding childhood problems.

Notice also the style of the narration: it is told in a youthful voice with modern American slang.  It is colloquial and conversational, as if spoken aloud.  It is a loose sentence, full of interrupters and clauses and phrases, suggestive of high intelligence and a complex personality.

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Can you give an example of tone in literature?

Tone refers to the emotional content of a work of literature. Tone is not a kind of poetic device or figure of speech, nor is it connected specifically to any stylistic element in literature. Rather, tone is the result of the impressions literary language makes on the reader. Take, for instance, the opening of Poe's "The Fall of the House of Usher":

During the whole of a dull, dark, and soundless day in the autumn of the year, when the clouds hung oppressively low in the heavens, I had been passing alone, on horseback, through a singularly dreary tract of country, and at length found myself, as the shades of the evening drew on, within view of the melancholy House of Usher.

This sentence is full of remarkable imagery; one can easily imagine a solitary rider in a desolate country. The tone of the passage, however, refers not to the image, but how it makes one feel—there is a sense of foreboding and loneliness. In this case, Poe uses certain words to guide us. "Dark," "dreary," and "melancholy" all reinforce the tone of quiet dread.

Some examples of tone are less explicit. In Ezra Pound's famous poem "In a Station of the Metro," the two lines of description have nothing to do with each other, yet through their juxtaposition, meaning is created:

The apparition of these faces in the crowd
Petals on a wet, black bough.

The tone of this poem is harder to define than in the case of Poe, but we can look to certain words and images for guidance. The word "apparition," for instance—meaning ghostly—suggests a kind of mental state in which the reality of the crowd at the station melts away into fantasy or illusion. The word "petals" in the second line comes as a surprise, especially as we are led by the syntax to assume that "petals" refers to the "faces in the crowd." Although the poem does not make this comparison, the reader does. The crowd at the metro is like the branch of a flowering tree: this connection makes no logical sense, but it carries a lot of "tonal" meaning, in the sense that it makes us feel a certain way about those people and the petals.

In this case, the tone is clearly not the same for every reader: one can find a certain joyfulness in the implied connection of humanity and nature; there is a certain quiet surprise at he association of natural beauty with the (apparent) ugliness of the crowd. The neutral way in which these images are presented also affects the tone: because the voice of the poet is almost absent, in the sense that there is no story here, no reason for these images to be combined, the poem achieves a sense of austere loneliness. The image is beautiful but somehow separate from us. We contemplate it from afar.

So you can see that making tonal evaluations can be very subjective. The problem most students have with understanding tone is that they expect it to be a kind of "fact," as if identifying tone was the same as saying who the protagonist is, whereas tone, quite simply, is how a piece makes you feel.

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