In Hamlet, act 3, scene 3, is it plausible that Claudius senses Hamlet's presence and his desire for revenge while he prays?

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Well, according to the stage directions in the play, Hamlet enters after Claudius gives his soliloquy, which is intensely spiritual and focused on his soul and the afterlife.  Observe:

O, my offence is rank it smells to heaven;


O, what form of prayer
Can serve my turn?


O wretched state! O bosom black as death!
O limed soul, that, struggling to be free,
Art more engaged! Help, angels! Make assay!

You can't have Hamlet step on those lines with an entry.  They are full of apostrophes to pain and suffering, and to have another body on stage will diminish their power and relevancy.

Hamlet enters and says his monologue, so the audience should be watching and listening to it, for it is a response to the soliloquy.  You can't have the audience's eye drawn to Claudius acting like he knows Hamlet is there.  It's just too hoaky.

Plus, there's not enough time.  Claudius only has a couple of lines after that, and then he's gone.  Not to mention that when Claudius says, "My words fly up...," he's talking about the silent ones in prayer, so he's obviously busy praying.  His praying is dramatic irony enough: the main thing is that we know Hamlet is there, not him.  You can't have him praying and noticing Hamlet.  Too busy.

The scene is about spiritual crisis for both Claudius and Hamlet, not about the closeness of two actors.  It's about Claudius worrying about his soul, maybe for the first time.  Hamlet, too, is worried about Claudius' soul: he doesn't want to send him to heaven, only hell.  He realizes that it's spiritually not the right time to kill, which is ironic and funny.

Let the audience focus on the words, not some non-verbal action on stage.  Shakespeare's all about the language, not the action, and certainly not subtext and subtleties.  I wouldn't diminish those words for anything.  That's what a movie adaptation is for.  You might be able to do it with a close-up, but not on stage, not even in the round.  Too much can go wrong.

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There is no indication in the play that Claudius knows of Hamlet's presence when Claudius is in the chapel praying. More evidence points to a lack of awareness on the part of Claudius than an awareness of Hamlet's presence.  Despite the fact that Claudius knows Hamlet suspects him of having murdered King Hamlet, it doesn't make sense for Claudius to purposely let Hamlet hear him confessing his crime.  What benefit would there be for Claudius?  He isn't contrite because he says he can't be truly sorry since he still has the benefits of his crime - the throne and Gertrude (3.3. ll. 51-55).  If he wanted Hamlet to hear him, it would be more sensible to show complete sorrow and beg for foregiveness.  I'm not sure that Claudius and Hamlet share a special bond or closeness that would allow Claudius to "feel" Hamlet's presence.  I don't know of any proof of that connection.

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