Essays Cover Image

Essays

by eNotes

Start Free Trial

Student Question

How should I start and conclude a 250-word essay on my university experience, and what are the essential parts?

Quick answer:

Begin your essay by reflecting on your expectations before starting university, setting up a comparison between those anticipations and your actual experiences. Use a thesis statement to highlight these similarities and differences. Incorporate humor through personal anecdotes, such as amusing campus or dormitory experiences, to engage your reader. Conclude by summarizing how your university life differed from your expectations, emphasizing personal growth and the ability to laugh at oneself.

Expert Answers

An illustration of the letter 'A' in a speech bubbles

Why not set up the essay about your experience at the university as a comparison/contrast essay? You could introduce the essay with a reflection upon your dreams and anticipations of what going to college would be like. Then, your thesis can build upon the similarities and differences of your imaginings about college as compared to what your actual experiences have been. In doing this, too, you can inject some humor with narrative examples, or brief stories, about funny experiences in the cafeteria or on other parts of campus, the first day of a class, etc.  Here is a sample of a narrative example:

At last, the long-anticipated day came and I arrived at what would be my home-away-from-home for years. Excited at first, incredulously, I began to miss the sister I loved to torture when evening came and my victim was not around. What would I spend the time doing now? Glancing around my miniscule dorm room in which I had already put away my clothes and other personal belongings, i sought occupation. "Oh, the television!" I thought. So, I flipped through channels, but while I did this, there was a chill crawling up my back. I was alone, and I was afraid of tomorrow. Worse than this, I actually wished I could talk about this to my sister.

Don't be afraid to employ amusing anecdotes that genuinelly make fun of yourself. Professors often enjoy a departure from the serious and the affected attempts of students to try to impress them with profound observations. The ability to laugh at oneself is a talent, really.

(See the link below for instructions on a comparative/contrast essay.)

Get Ahead with eNotes

Start your 48-hour free trial to access everything you need to rise to the top of the class. Enjoy expert answers and study guides ad-free and take your learning to the next level.

Get 48 Hours Free Access
Approved by eNotes Editorial