Sample Essay Outlines
Sample Analytical Paper Topics
Topic #1
Near the beginning of The Edible Woman, Marian McAlpin asks: “What. . .
could I expect to turn into at Seymour Surveys?” What could Marian turn into?
What does she turn into? Has she changed by the end of the novel? If so, how
has she changed, and why?
Outline:
I. Thesis Statement: In The Edible Woman, Marian McAlpin escapes the
tediousness of her job and the dangers posed by a life with her monopolizing
boyfriend, Peter, and discovers her own identity.
II. Ways in which Marian is prevented from finding an identity of her
own:
A. Menial job in a male-dominated business.
B. Monopolizing boyfriend/fiancé.
C. Susceptibility to the expectations of others.
D. Compliance/passivity.
III. Ways in which Marian breaks the compliance cycle:
A. The influence of aimless, nontraditional Duncan.
B. Her eating problem: a sign that something is wrong.
C. Visions of her future with Peter.
D. The realization that she has to do something—she’s invented her own little
cul-de-sac, must find her way out.
E. Bakes a cake and confronts Peter.
IV. Conclusion: By finally becoming aware of the external forces influencing her life, Marian is able to confront her own “fantasies” and live life on her own terms.
Topic #2
What is Marian’s relationship to the other characters in the novel? How do her
relationships with each of the characters influence the choices that she
makes?
Outline:
I. Thesis Statement: In The Edible Woman, Marian is surround-ed by a
cast of characters who represent a menu of possible futures. Throughout the
entire period of her engagement to Peter, Marian struggles to make sense of
these unappealing options until finally deciding to invent a new choice of her
own.
II. The cast of characters (as seen by Marian):
A. Ainsley: independent, deceptive, anti-marriage, gets married.
B. Clara: at one time, the “ideal of translucent perfume-advertisement
femininity,” now trapped and vegetative.
C. Peter: conservative, bound to be successful, controlling, destructive.
D. The three office virgins: interchangeable, waiting to be rescued by a
man.
E. Duncan: Peter’s opposite, acts as a guide to Marian, but not the victorious
suitor.
III. Signs that Marian wishes to break away from the options that are
presented to her:
A. She runs away from Peter (after leaving the bar, hides under Len’s bed, runs
away from Len’s apartment).
B. Shift in narrative voice; a sign that all is not right.
C. Seeks comfort from/is drawn to Duncan.
D. Wishes to run through the freshly fallen snow and make new tracks of her
own.
E. At the party, where all of these characters are assembled together, Marian
decides that she must get away (her flight to Duncan proves disillusioning and
ineffective).
F. Creates a substitute for the version of herself Peter wanted her to
be/confronts Peter.
IV. Conclusion: By the end of the novel, Marian has realized that the options presented to her are restrictive and destructive to her sense of individual identity. She creates a new beginning for herself by breaking ties with Peter and (quite literally) carving up his image of her.
Topic #3
At the end of the novel, Duncan tells Marian that she is back to “so-called
reality”—a “consumer.” This statement might suggest that Marian is no better
off now than she was at the beginning of the novel. Construct an argument that
demonstrates how Marian does not successfully escape society’s mould.
Outline:
I. Thesis Statement: Although Marian appears to learn a great deal from the
experiences of the past few months, the final chapters of The Edible...
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Woman prove that she is still unable to free herself of external demands and expectations.
II. Evidence that Marian continuously lets others dictate her actions:
A. Agrees to work on a Saturday to conduct the Moose Beer survey.
B. Agrees to join Peter in the bathtub—even though she would clearly prefer the
bed.
C. Agrees to a drastic make-over for Peter’s party.
D. Regularly second-guesses her own judgement.
E. Her awareness of the manipulative intentions underlying supermarket music
does not make her immune to it.
F. Her decisions are often short-lived (for example, just moments before
agreeing to marry Peter, she had decided that they were no longer
involved).
III. Evidence that Marian has not changed by the end of the novel:
A. After her big decision in the ravine, Marian is still reluctant to return
home by herself.
B. After baking her cake, she experiences a moment of doubt and fears that she
may still accept Peter’s version of herself.
C. After explaining to Duncan how she overcame her eating problems, Marian
questions her own conclusions (be-cause he disagrees with her).
D. Marian is willingly returning to the same conditions and same expectations
as the ones she has just escaped.
IV. Conclusion: Although Marian does break off her engagement to Peter, there is no escaping the truth of Duncan’s words: Marian will return to the world of consumerism and will continue to be a victim of its manipulations and injustices.