Setting
The landscape of Cloudy in the West sprawls across the heart of Central Texas, stretching from the charming town of Athens down to the bustling city of Austin, and then unfurling westward through the rugged hill country to the vast expanse of the Pecos Frontier, culminating at Fort Stockton. Despite this wide-ranging backdrop, the novel’s soul is rooted in two pivotal locales: the Shipman Ranch nestled in the lush greenery of East Texas and the wild, untamed expanse of "The West" circa 1885.
The Shipman Ranch
The Shipman Ranch stands as a bastion of relentless toil, familial bonds, and the modest comfort that land and livestock can offer. It is the refuge for Joey and John Shipman. Following the death of Joey's mother, the warmth and stability of this sanctuary waned, yet the presence of Pa and the venerable Reuben provided a semblance of continuity. In a bid to fill the void left by his wife, John Shipman wedded Dulcie, whose disdain for Joey and the ranch was evident. With the passing of Pa and Reuben, Joey's grip on security was tethered solely to the ranch, a sanctuary threatened by Dulcie's whispered intentions to sell the land, abandon Joey, and seek the bustling life of Waco or Dallas. Convinced of Dulcie's sinister plans against him, Joey resolves to break free from his precarious predicament by seeking out Beau Shipman, his wayward cousin.
The Journey West
The allure of the open road calls to Joey and Beau, steering them toward the legendary expanse of the untamed West, the novel’s second vibrant setting. Out on the open road, the cumbersome burdens of ranch life—raging bulls, tangled cornfields, a vindictive stepmother, pursuing sheriffs, and stifling laws—fade into insignificance. Joey embraces the liberty to ride at will, savor drink, and indulge in canned sardines and tomatoes on a whim. Yet, this newfound freedom comes at a price, as the West reveals itself to be a realm fraught with peril: lawless outlaws, the gnawing bite of hunger, lurking dangers, venomous rattlesnakes, prickly cactus spines, prowling wolves, and cowboys with little regard for civility. The reality of the West proves to be far cloudier than the ideal they had envisioned, leading them back to the relative security of the Shipman ranch.
Literary Qualities
Cloudy in the West is, akin to Mark Twain's seminal work Huckleberry Finn (1884; see separate entry, Vol. 2), a tale of a young boy's tumultuous voyage towards maturity. The narrative lens is focused entirely on Joey, unveiling his thoughts and emotions, never straying far from his side to depict events involving other characters. Although Beau and Alta accompany him on this journey, gaining invaluable life lessons along the way, the narrative remains firmly tethered to Joey's perspective.
Kelton crafts vivid and meaningful imagery, painting a picture in the reader’s mind that vividly illustrates the unfolding story. With the tale primarily seen through Joey's eyes, many of these striking images originate from his imagination. For instance, when Joey finds himself trapped on the ranch following his father's demise—surrounded by murderous intentions and nowhere to go—he envisions a fly ensnared in a spider's web, a poignant metaphor for his plight. In his mind, he is the fly, while Dulcie is the "black widow spider" poised to strike. After Reuben passes away, Joey muses that his friend's death would relieve Dulcie, "Like pulling a thorn out of her foot." Even when images pertain more to others, it's often Joey who envisages their thoughts. Observing the brutish Hull, Joey imagines Beau might say Hull "was playing poker with a deck short on aces and long...
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on jokers." Yet, Kelton doesn't confine imagery to Joey alone; about Hull again, the narrator describes the outlaw retreating "like a porcupine rolling up into a ball with its bristles out."
The very title, Cloudy in the West, encapsulates the dominant imagery coursing through the novel. To Joey and Beau, the West symbolizes a romantic realm of liberation, an escape from the relentless toil and troubles plaguing them in East Texas. However, their encounter with this mythical land and its storied characters reveals stark realities. Beau realizes, "It's Cloudy in the West and fixin' to rain misery."
The novel unfolds in a circular form, an unconventional choice for a narrative centered on a journey to maturity. However, Kelton's theme transcends the straightforward coming-of-age arc of a boy traveling from one place to another, evolving along the way. Joey is ensnared by romantic idealism, believing that the path to maturity lies somewhere "west"—a physical destination and a metaphorical landscape—where he can escape his domestic woes. Yet, Kelton reveals that true maturity demands recognizing that every place, even the West, is shrouded with challenges. These clouds cannot be simply escaped by moving to new locations; internal illusions and immaturity must also dissipate. Though Joey could have faced his metaphorical clouds at Fort Stockton with Alister Mclntosh, his roots trace back to where his father imparted his earliest life lessons. The paradox of seeking maturity through venturing into new frontiers is that the further you journey from your origins, the more you need the inherent strength they provide. Joey’s fascination with the West leads him farther from what he cherished, yet through this dual journey westward and into his own heart, he learns to confront and address life's genuine problems by returning home.
One of the most striking examples of the novel's circular form is Joey's encounter with the notorious Jersey bull. In the first chapter, the bull nearly claims his life; in the final chapter, Chapter 17, Joey boldly ventures into the pasture to confront the beast once more. As the bull charges, the young man stands firm, smiting it with a poker and shouting, "Hyahh! Git, you son of a bitch." The bull obeys. When Beau, amused, teases Joey as "boy" for his language, Joey retorts, "And don't you know it's time you quit callin' me boy?"
For Further Reference
Alder, Judy. Elmer Kelton and West Texas: A Literary Relationship. Denton, TX: University of North Texas Press, 1989. Alder champions Kelton as "an outstanding regional novelist," praising his profound understanding of both his thematic terrain and literary prowess. The book offers an excellent bibliography that covers both primary and secondary sources.
Clayton, Lawrence. Elmer Kelton. Boise: Boise State University, 1986. Dean Clayton, former president of the Texas Folklore Society, intricately depicts the life and literary journey of Kelton.
——. "Epic Qualities in Kelton's The Wolf and the Buffalo." RE: Artes Liberales 8, 2 (Spring 1982): 5-13. In this comparison to Homer's The Iliad and The Odyssey, Clayton concludes that Kelton's novel "qualifies as a Western epic."
Davis, Kenneth. "Elmer Kelton." In Updating the Literary West. Edited by Max Westbrook and Dan Flores. Fort Worth: Texas Christian University Press, 1997, pp. 580-584.
Dingas, Anne. "The Good Old Boy." Texas Monthly 23 (December 1995): 80+. Dingas explores Kelton's narratives through the lens of his native environment, revealing the influence of his surroundings on his creations.
Erisman, Fred. "Elmer Kelton's 'Other' West." Western American Literature 28, 4 (Winter 1994): 291-299. Erisman paints Kelton's heroes as "homely, realistic denizens" who inhabit the authentic West, a stark contrast to the mythical figures often seen in Western lore.
Grover, Dorys. "Bowie's Mine: Legend into Fiction." RE: Artes Liberales 7, 2 (Spring 1981), 9-17. Grover delves into the lore and history surrounding Jim Bowie's legendary quest for Apache silver mines in the 1830s, setting the scene for Kelton's novel.
Hunt, Jerry. One Collector's Bibliography. [Privately printed], 1993. Hunt provides a comprehensive list of Kelton's literary accolades and pseudonyms, accompanied by an extensive bibliography. A "suggested reading" section offers insights into books Kelton himself has discussed, alongside references on Western novels.
Kelton, Elmer. "Bone Dry." Texas Monthly 24 (July 1996): 74-75+. Kelton vividly portrays the relentless drought's impact on farmers and ranchers, showcasing his deep-rooted connection to the challenges of Western ranch life.
——. Elmer Kelton Country: The Short Nonfiction of a Texas Novelist. Fort Worth, TX: Texas Christian University Press, 1993. This collection assembles Kelton's nonfiction talks and writings scattered across various newspapers and magazines, each piece illuminating the essence of Western life. Among the articles, "Snoring Mules" later finds a place in his work, Cloudy in the West.
——. "Fiction Writers Are Liars and Thieves." In The Bounty of Texas. Edited by Francis Abernethy. Denton: University of North Texas Press, 1990, pp. 50-62. Kelton reflects on how Western writers often weave tales by drawing from history and folklore, tailoring them to serve their narrative ambitions.
Smith, Rick. "'Elmerisms' capture West Texas' essence." Web Page: http://reporter news, com/ texas/ elmer 0504/ html. Smith compiles a collection of West Texas sayings or "Elmerisms" employed by Kelton, such as "Things just aren't like they used to be, and I don't know if they ever was" and "Price is no object, as long as it's not too high."
Talley Press, The. "Complete List of Books Written by Elmer Kelton." Web Page: http://www.talleypress.com/kelton/kellst.htm. This page is regularly refreshed with updates.
——. "About the Author-Elmer Kelton." Web Page: http://talleypress.com/kelton/kelbio.htm. Updated regularly.
Taylor, William. "Kelton draws praise as historically accurate liar/thief." Web Page: http://www.texaswest.com/standard-times/news/97/mar/1/17.htm. This page reports on a symposium dedicated to Western writers.