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How do Elisa's feelings and actions towards the stranger change in "The Chrysanthemums"?
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Elisa's feelings towards the stranger in "The Chrysanthemums" shift from initial resistance to openness and excitement. Initially wary, she becomes engaged when the stranger shows interest in her chrysanthemums, a passion that her husband and others overlook. This interaction awakens dormant emotions and self-awareness in Elisa, as she feels appreciated and understood. However, the tinker's deceit ultimately tarnishes this moment of connection and self-discovery.
Metaphorically linking Elisa with the "closed pot" of the fertile Salinas Valley, Steinbeck has both the land and Elisa existing in "a time of quiet and of waiting." After the stranger, who is "a big man," arrives with his dark and brooding eyes, he talks with Elisa about her chrysanthemums and draws her out by touching upon her passion for the flowers, causing womanly feelings in her that have been dormant to surface and become strongly aroused as she attains a new awareness of herself.
Throughout "The Chrysanthemums" there are many symbols of both sterility and fecundity. Certainly, the rich, black soil of the Salinas Valley suggests fertility. As Elisa digs in this earth with her "terrier fingers," she prepares the soil for her beloved flowers as she trims the old ones and places into the earth the green shoots. At this point, the "big, stubble-bearded man" rolls up in his wagon with "the triumphantly, definitive 'Fixed' below his sign and stops at her wire fence. He first asks the way to the Los Angeles highway. Then, he tries to engage Elisa by asking her if she needs anything sharpened, but her eyes "hardened with resistance." Realizing he cannot win her over, the man begins to speak with "a whining undertone" and feigns interest in her flowers supposedly for the sake of a woman he knows who wants to have some, and Elisa begins to respond as her eyes "became alert and eager." She tells the peddler that she will fix some for him to take to the woman:
Her eyes shone. She tore off the battered hat and shook out her dark pretty hair. "I'll put them in a flower pot, and you can take them right with you."
In her actions of preparing the chrysanthemums, Elisa loosens restraints upon her emotions. "The gloves were forgotten now." With naked hands, Elisa demonstrates to the man how to plant the flowers and how to prepare for the "budding that takes the most care." As she instructs the man, Elisa looks deeply into his eyes and her mouth opens slightly; then, she kneels before him "[H]er breast swelled passionately"--certainly erotic actions. After these actions, her voice takes on a huskiness and she tells the man that she can understand his life.
"When the night is dark...why, the stars are sharp-pointed....Why you rise up and up! Every pointed star gets driven into your body....Hot and sharp and--lovely."
Much of that which has been dormant in Elisa in her man clothes as she digs in her garden, surrounded only by men and masculine affairs of baling hay and selling cattle, is aroused in Elisa with the peddler, who is able to awaken her emotions by talking to her about her beloved chrysanthemums that touch her sentiments to make her feel sympathetic to him, and to feel more womanly later on with her husband.
How does Elisa's conversation with the stranger become meaningful in "The Chrysanthemums"?
Elisa is alone on a ranch in a California valley when a tinker drives up to her farm to sell her his services and goods. Elisa is a bit put off by his forwardness and hesitates to converse with him, much less buy anything he has to sell.
The tinker is experienced in his profession and sets about to talk his way into a sale. He is quick to note her working with the flowers and to realize these have value for her. He gets her talking about the flowers and Elisa is sold.
The conversation becomes meaningful because no one has ever approached her about the flowers. Her husband is much too busy running the ranch to notice. There are no other women in the story who would notice such things. The flowers are an extravagance on a hard working ranch and so are unnecessary or unimportant. But, now, Elisa has found someone with whom to talk about her flowers. She loves being able to share the joy and sweetness of her success with the flowers. Her isolation and loneliness are assuaged and she finds herself even eager to partake in the conversation with the tinker.
When the tinker departs, Elisa experiences a resurgence of self-awareness. Being admired and appreciated by the tinker for her talents awakens a very basic need in her, one that has been very dormant in her busy ranch life. Her whole being vibrates with the moment of the shared conversation--one which we know will soon be tarnished and destroyed by the tinker's disdain and duplicity.
The converation changes for Elisa the moment the stranger asks about her chrysanthemums. Once he expresses interest in the flowers she works so hard on, Elisa's personality changes and she becomes more more open to what the stranger has to say. Eventually they talk about his life on the road and his "friend" (who we later learn is made up) who also grows chrysanthemums. It is these flowers, and Elisa's love of working in the soil, that connects these two characters.
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