One of the most unique elements of The Chocolate War is its changing narrative perspectives. The chapters are typically short, and it's uncommon for the same character's viewpoint to carry over into the next chapter. However, the "hero" or main character of the story is undeniably evident. The first chapter draws readers to connect with Jerry Renault, a young quarterback who bravely gets back up after several tough tackles, dreaming of joining the football team. These initial scenes on the field, along with Jerry's responses, suggest we are about to follow a traditional hero who, with determination and courage, will face challenges and achieve his dreams.

The novel boasts a large cast, with nearly all of Jerry's classmates mentioned by name. Central characters whose viewpoints often shape the narrative include Archie Costello, Obie, Emile Janza, and Roland Goubert. There are also characters whose perspectives serve specific, targeted purposes. For example, in Chapter 16, David Caroni is used to reveal Brother Leon's underlying corruption. Similarly, Brian Cochran, especially in Chapter 22, is the treasurer who discovers and ponders the financial irregularities. Occasionally, the narrative perspective broadens, with some chapters offering a collective viewpoint. Cormier uses this technique to depict events like the ongoing chocolate sale, as demonstrated in Chapter 14. This results in a narrative structure that is more complex than most adult novels, let alone young adult fiction. Cormier's expert use of multiple perspectives has become a signature of his writing. In The Chocolate War, his masterful execution keeps readers engaged and, importantly, connected with Jerry.