Discussion Topic
Poe's choice not to detail the "injuries and insult" in "The Cask of Amontillado."
Summary:
Edgar Allan Poe's choice not to detail the "injuries and insult" in "The Cask of Amontillado" creates ambiguity, leaving readers to speculate about the reasons behind Montresor's revenge. This omission heightens the story's suspense and focuses attention on Montresor's psychological state rather than the specific grievances, emphasizing themes of pride and revenge.
Why doesn't Poe detail the "thousand injuries" or insult in "The Cask of Amontillado"?
Poe's narrator Montresor talks disparagingly about Italians who deal in expensive merchandise such as gemmery with foreign millionaires. This brief passage suggests that Montresor does not consider himself an Italian and also that both he and Fortunato are business competitors dealing in art, antiques, jewelry, and other things, including fine wines. Since Fortunato is rich and well connected, while Montresor is obviously poor, it is conceivable that many of the thousand injuries in question were inflicted in business dealings. Fortunato could outbid Montresor and could afford to buy in larger quantities. When Fortunato learns that Montresor has acquired a "pipe" of Amontillado, 126 gallons, at a bargain price, he immediately thinks he might buy a whole shipload at an even better price. But he has to make sure it is the real Amontillado. He does not merely want to drink a glass of sherry or to show off his connoisseurship.
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Poe's narrator Montresor talks disparagingly about Italians who deal in expensive merchandise such as gemmery with foreign millionaires. This brief passage suggests that Montresor does not consider himself an Italian and also that both he and Fortunato are business competitors dealing in art, antiques, jewelry, and other things, including fine wines. Since Fortunato is rich and well connected, while Montresor is obviously poor, it is conceivable that many of the thousand injuries in question were inflicted in business dealings. Fortunato could outbid Montresor and could afford to buy in larger quantities. When Fortunato learns that Montresor has acquired a "pipe" of Amontillado, 126 gallons, at a bargain price, he immediately thinks he might buy a whole shipload at an even better price. But he has to make sure it is the real Amontillado. He does not merely want to drink a glass of sherry or to show off his connoisseurship.
When Fortunato and Montresor reach the vaults at the bottom of the stairs, Montresor tells him, "The Montresors were a great numerous family," and Fortunato says, "I forget your arms." This in itself is somewhat insulting, since they have known each other for many years and are supposedly good friends. It is possible that the family was not a socially prominent one and did not even have a coat of arms. They were not descended from knights or royalty but from merchants or even rich peasants. And Fortunato may suspect this and be trying to embarrass Montresor. When Montresor describes his coat of arms he may be inventing it along with the Latin motto, "Nemo me impune lacessit." After all, there is no reason to assume that Montressor is telling Fortunato the truth about anything.
So that may account for many of the injuries and may be an example of the type of insult Fortunato is capable of. Another example is seen soon after when Montresor claims to be a mason. Fortunato says, "You? Impossible! A mason?" Fortunato is suggesting that Montresor would never be accepted into the Order of Freemasons but would be blackballed. In some masonic lodges it only takes one black ball to bar an applicant for membership. This is a flagrant albeit unconscious insult, and it provokes Montresor to show the trowel he has been concealing under his cloak. A trowel, of course, is an indispensible tool of stone masons.
Montresor's name shows that he is of French descent. Although his family may have lived in Italy for many generations, Fortunato may consider him an outsider, an upstart, a johnny-come-lately; and Fortunato may take opportunities to remind Montresor of his inferior social status. Montresor does not even consider himself an Italian. He criticizes Italians early in his narrative. He is not wearing a costume to participate in their big carnival. He tries to keep up appearances, but even his household servants do not respect him--possibly because he hasn't paid them lately. He is vulnerable to slurs and jibes.
Poe undoubtedly believed it is better to show rather than tell in a short story. If Montresor started to describe the thousand injuries at the beginning of his narrative, the reader might find it boring. Poe wanted to get into the action and dialogue as quickly as possible. He knew he could always allude to the injuries and insults later on. A lot of information in this masterpiece is conveyed dramatically rather than through tedious exposition.
One would think an aggrieved party, moved to murder, would be spouting off all the particular offenses incurred. But curiously, the narrator Montresor does not number the injuries because they are, to him, irrelevant. A clue to his unresponsiveness is in his family's crest, which has the Latin inscription "Nemo me impune lacessit," or "No one insults me with impunity." It's understood he has been insulted, and will therefore extract his revenge. His cool response suggests the old addage "Revenge is a dish best served cold." What Poe does with this description is characterize the cold, deliberate malfeasance of the narrator; the causes of his action to murder are unimportant, he is merely consumed with his cold passion for revenge. As the link states, one of the unique aspects of this story is that "Poe was criticized in his own time for daring to examine a crime with no apparent motive, and a murderer with no apparent remorse."
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Why didn't Poe explain the "injuries and insult" in "The Cask of Amontillado"?
Poe opens his story with the following two sentences:
THE THOUSAND INJURIES of Fortunato I had borne as I best could, but when he ventured upon insult I vowed revenge. You, who so well know the nature of my soul, will not suppose, however, that I gave utterance to a threat.
Poe is using the fiction that his protagonist Montresor is addressing someone who knows him intimately. It seems likely that this narrative was supposedly contained in a hand-written manuscript which somehow came into the hands of an American writer/editor who translated it from Italian (or possibly French) and published it in a ladies' magazine. By creating this fiction and this fictitious confidante, Poe relieves himself of the need to explain many things and focus on what is dramatic. Montresor should not have to give examples of the "thousand injuries" because he must have told his correspondent about a lot of them already. The single insult Montresor refers to is not sufficiently important to describe. It is the thousand injuries which Montresor has borne that will lead to Fortunato's death; the one insult only shows that Fortunato is escalating his abuse because he has been led to believe that Montresor will tolerate it.
Why should Montresor put up with a thousand injuries? These must have occurred over a period of years. Why didn't he just break off relations with Fortunato? Ir must be that he is financially dependent on this insolent man. The third paragraph of the narrative suggests that they are both gentlemen-businessmen who deal in expensive merchandise such as oil paintings, antique furniture, jewelry (gemmary), and no doubt in gourmet wines. Fortunato is rich and Montresor is poor. No doubt Montresor receives part of his income through his relationship with Fortunato. For example, Montresor might receive finders fees on transactions which he cannot afford to handle himself. Venice is a dying city in which many impecunious aristocrats are surviving in their dilapidated palazzi by selling off priceless heirlooms which might include masterpieces by Renaissance artists. Naturally the sellers would want respect, secrecy, and reliability. Since Montresor appears to know more about some luxury goods than Fortunato, the two men could have a symbiotic relationship, although Fortunato would always have the upper hand because he was the one with the most capital. He also appears to have a much older name and an insider status in Venetian society.
Poe avoided describing any of Fortunato's injuries because, in addition to making his story longer, it would have been hard to think of injuries that would not have become generally known. If people thought Montresor had been seriously and repeatedly injured, then Montresor would become a prime suspect when Fortunato disappeared--and Montresor wants to be absolutely above suspicion.
Poe deliberately requires his reader to make guesses. This is a good way to involve a reader in a story. Ernest Hemingway did something similar in some of his best short stories, including "The Killers" and "Hills Like White Elephants"--but Poe did it long before Hemingway.
"The Cask of Amontillado" by Edgar Allan Poe was Poe's last short story. It is certainly a masterpiece of horror. The grotesque settiing and madness of the main characters lead the reader into revenge, murder, trickery, and betrayal.
The narrator of the story is the main character or unsympathetic, protagonist Montresor. He is not the normal, heroic main character. The force that drives Montresor is his need to punish Fortunato with impunity. In translation, Poe meant that Montresor wants to commit the perfect crime; and that is exactly what he does. The reader learns at the end of the story that Montresor has told the story as a flashback fifty years later.
Back in the time of this story, when someone insulted another person, often the problem would be resolved with a duel using some kind of swords. This is is not how Montresor wishes to acquire his vengenance.
Why does Montresor seek revenge? Fortunato has injured him not physically but verbally or spiritually many times. The thing that sends Montresor over the edge was an insult that Fortunate inflicted on him. Most people do not kill because they have been insulted:
The thousand injuries of Fortunato I had borne as I best could, but when he ventured upon insult I vowed revenge. You, who so well know the nature of my soul, will not suppose, however, that I gave utterance to a threat.
Apparently, to Poe, the details of the insults or injuries were not important. It was how the insult was repaid that became the crux of the story. This is taking the old cliche in reverse to the fartherest limit: Sticks and stones may break my bones, but words will never hurt me. In this story, this is not the case.
Poe allows some insight into the thinking of Montresor when he gives the family motto and coat of arms. Apparently, if something is done to this family, there will be revenge. The snake being stepped on and turning back and biting the foot indicates there will be vindication.
The story circulates around the trickery, betrayal, and trust held between these two characters. Fortunato trusts Montresor enough to follow him down into the catacombs to taste wine. Then, Montresor feels betrayal by a supposed friend who has insulted that friendship; therefore, he will use a ruse to get his arrogant, drunken "friend" to follow him all the way to his death.