What is the metrical scheme of Donne's "Batter my heart, three-personed God"?
This famous sonnet by John Donne does not follow a regular metrical scheme, and indeed does not possess a very tight organisation as a poem. We can say that on the whole it is written as a loose iambic pentameter, with the word "loose" denoting the fact that quite a...
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few lines have more than ten syllables, and that the metre of the lines is definitely not regular or constant. Consider the first two lines as an example of the poem's variation on form:
Batter my heart, three-person'd God ; for you
As yet but knock ; breathe, shine, and seek to mend...
Both lines have ten syllables, but it is clear that there is not a regular iambic meter, as the first line starts off with the stress on the first syllable, and the second line contains a number of spondees, serving to emphasise the words "knock; breathe, shine." Meter therefore is something that is fluid in this poem and used by the poet to emphasise certain aspects of the poem rather than something to be slavishly adhered to.
Analyze the poem "Batter my heart, three-personed God; for you" by John Donne.
John Donne's poem "Batter My Heart, Three-Person'd God" is religious in nature.
John Donne's early poetry was deemed "love" poetry, probably written before his marriage to Anne More. His love sonnets became more serious then, but after Anne's death, Donne began to write Holy Sonnets, some of which were more spiritual in nature. In this poem, Donne is speaking to God. Overall, he is acknowledging the Trinity (Father, Son and Holy Ghost)—aware that his earthly ways too often serve the Devil—and asks for God to renew their connection so that Donne (or the speaker) will be closer to God.
When Donne writes, "Batter my heart, three-person'd God," he is saying hit my heart hard, Father, Son and Holy Ghost. In a sense, Donne is saying that his heart has been hardened, a biblical reference to one whose heart is not open to something, the voice of reason, or (in this case), God's voice or calling. (You may recall that when Moses tries to take Israelites out of Egypt, God hardens Pharaoh's heart.) Donne continues with this thought, asking then, too, for new life ("breathe") and a mending of his soul: that as Donne rises from God's onslaught (almost like a cleansing with fire), his Heavenly father's would overwhelm Donne, break his old ways and renew his heart.
...for, you
As yet but knocke, breathe, shine, and seeke to mend;
That I may rise, and stand, o'erthrow mee, 'and bend
Your force, to breake, blow, burn and make me new.
Donne then uses a metaphor, comparing himself to the people of a town that has been taken by military force and now owes its allegiance to its new leader (God), but persists in being difficult and stubborn, unable to be turned as he should be, in being "usurped." He is not faithful to his new "lord."
I, like an usurpt towne, to'another due,
Labour to'admit you, but Oh, to no end,
Reason your viceroy in mee, mee should defend,
But is captiv'd, and proves weake or untrue.
The poem shifts here, as sonnets often do at the start of the third quatrain (four-line stanza), specifically the ninth line. As the first two quatrains speak of Donne's (or the speaker's) inability to embrace the newness in a life following God, the speaker now says that despite his stubbornness alluded to previously, he really loves God, but feels tied ("betroth'd" or "promised to") God's enemy, the Devil. He asks God to break or ("divorce") him from the connection that he has with Satan, that then God will take him as a prisoner.
Yet dearley'I love you,'and would be loved faine,
But am betroth'd unto your enemie:
Divorce mee,'untie, or breake that knot againe,
Take mee to you, imprison mee…[for I…]
The rhyming couplet at the end of the sonnet (the last two lines)—which acts as a conclusion to the poem—asks that when God imprisons the speaker, He would never let the speaker be "free" of God. There is a paradox in the last two lines, as well, where the speaker notes that he will never be pure unless God "ravishes" him. In human terms, to ravish is often associated with overcoming one or taking him by force; with regard to women, the term often refers to taking them sexually by force. But spiritually, Donne is saying that unless God takes complete control of him ("ravishes" him), the speaker can never be pure (which is the opposite of being ravished, hence the paradox).
[...for I]
Except you'enthrall mee, never shall be free,
Nor ever chast, except you ravish mee.
Analyze the poem "Batter my heart, three-personed God; for you" by John Donne.
This is one of John Donne's Holy Sonnets, that explore and describe the relationship of the poet with his maker. In particular, this poem describes the way in which a new life can be begun through God's gift of grace. It is important to focus on the way that the speaker, as a sinful man, is presented. The figures of speech that are used present him as one who is helplessly sinful and who, by his own strength, is unable to change this situation. Thus it is that the speaker describes himself as being "betrothed unto your enemy."
Such descriptions yield some immensely powerful paradoxes that describe the need of the speaker for God's grace and to highlight the various paradoxes that lie at the heart of the Christian creed, such as life only being possible through death. Thus the last three lines capture the essence of such paradoxes as they present the appeal of the speaker to God:
Take me to you, imprison me, for I
Except you enthrall me, never shall be free,
Nor ever chaste, except you ravish me.
Paradoxically, the human sinner is so sinful and trapped in his position that he needs to be imprisoned to be truly free and "ravished" to be "chaste." Thus the sonnet explores the concept and process of spiritual regeneration as the soul is only able to be given life through the grace of God. Note how the passive nature of the speaker and his urgings to God to enact this process, with some violence, both reinforce the plight of the speaker's condition and the way that such regeneration can only come from God alone and his grace.