Summary
The title suggests a story that treats life in the Caribbean island of Barbados, perhaps on the microcosmic scale that suits the scope of the short story. However, the main character, Mr. Watford, deliberately lives far outside the mainstream of Barbadian society. He lives alone in an ostentatious plantation house with stone walls, large windows, and a columned portico, which is set far back from the gate that separates it from the crude wooden houses of the village. He tries to live like a white man. His house is an emblem of such a life, with size and pretense, with its furniture from Grand Rapids, Michigan, and its enormous parlor, where in the evenings he reads the newspapers from Boston. He is pleased when the boy who comes to order coconuts for Mr. Goodman shows him deferential gestures usually reserved for whites. Although he worked in a Boston hospital until he retired at sixty-five and although he has kept his American accent, furniture, and newspapers, he had been as detached from American life as he is from life in Barbados, the homeland to which he returned to buy his plantation and live five years before the story begins.
Alone, he works his five hundred trees all day, from dawn to dusk. At seventy, his vigor is fading, though he works ever harder to deny it, driving his body to perform as it did when he was much younger. His lean body is filled with tension, as if he could clench into himself all of his strength and prevent himself from breaking down in exhaustion and despair.
His solitude, his independence, his routine, and his forced energy all isolate him from the village. His disdain for his own people lies in his inability to hate the white family who forced him into servility when he worked for them as a yard boy. His hatred was redirected toward his own race, even toward his mother, who had given birth to nine stillborn children and whose only child to survive was himself. His terrible fear of death, his racial disgust, and his self-loathing drive him to work like a young man, a slave to his weakness and fear.
The antithesis to Watford is Goodman: corpulent, full of lusty vitality and magnanimity, with a rum shop and a coconut booth at the racetrack, a wife, two mistresses, and fourteen children. Goodman dispensing coconuts to the loud, sweating vulgar crowd at the track is the very image of sociability—an image that disgusts Watford. When Goodman comes to buy Watford’s coconuts for resale, Watford criticizes as an idler the young man whom Goodman had sent to order the coconuts. Goodman replies that people such as Watford and himself, who have money, must provide work for those who need it. Watford balks at Goodman’s assertion that they are responsible for helping others and becomes nauseous with rage when Goodman says that he will send a girl the next day for Watford to hire as a servant.
To have a servant in the house would violate the isolation that Watford has built around himself, would deny his complete self-reliance. To reveal the slightest need for the aid of another human might well lead to his confronting his true self as a mortal, black, aging man.
The servant appears the next day, a young woman barefoot in the driveway, standing as she must have stood, in the sun, from her arrival until his return at noon from the grove. Her stillness and self-possession contrast with Watford’s frenetic activity. He tries to send her away, but she replies that she...
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will be beaten if she does not work at least one day. After she fixes his lunch, he decides to send her back at the end of the day with a dollar in payment. She prepares his tea and a late supper, but when he looks for her to send her away, he finds her in an unused room under the stoop, asleep on a cot. He feels like an intruder in his own house. He decides to send her away the next morning.
When he descends at his customary 5:00 a.m., he smells breakfast and finds her sweeping the corridor. He thrusts the dollar at her and orders her out, but she tells him that it is raining. Her faint trust dies at that moment. Though she remains to cook and keep house, she becomes silent and more a part of the house than a human presence because Watford refuses to converse with her.
He preserves his isolation even in her company, yet something about her, the tilt of her head, which reminds him of his mother, works on his affections. After many weeks of her working every day, she goes on a bus excursion on the August bank holiday. Her absence is suddenly more of a disruption than her presence ever was. He feels betrayed by her eagerness to take the day off. He dresses carefully for her return, cleans his nails, and brushes his hair. The feelings mounting in him are those that he has repressed all his life, those of both father and lover, wanting to punish and to protect her.
After watching for some time for her return, he sees her in the moonlight with the boy whom Mr. Goodman had sent, the two of them laughing and frolicking and dancing. The tension with which Watford has held himself together as he has grown old goes limp, and he is unable to speak or act. Unnerved and unmanned, Watford sinks into his bed, aroused and tormented by the thought of the two outside. Sensing them inside the house, he dashes toward her room, preparing his anger for his discovery, but she is alone instead, her clothes twisted about her, and womanly in a way he has not seen before in her. His anger fails him, and he supports himself against the wall. In his weakest moment, he recognizes that she is his last chance to live, but he cannot find the strength to win her, to approach her as a man. He must first defeat her, so he reproaches her and flings her onto the cot. That is the last exercise of his strength. She stands and slaps his hand aside, halting him with her first assertion of selfhood, calling him a “nasty, pissy old man.” Her greatest condemnation of him is uttered in language that sums up his predicament exactly, the result of his own confused racial identity: “You ain’t people, Mr. Watford, you ain’t people.”
The charge crushes him. The audacity of her rebellion strikes him hard, but even harder is the epiphany of the “waste and pretense which had spanned his years.” His heart gives out, and he dies with a great moan that fills the house and yard with his anguish.