David Daiches
[Moses] swings along rather well,
Genial, slack verse that is easy to read,
The rhythms loose and ambulatory,
The line lengths uneven,
The language now formal, now colloquial,
Echoes of the Bible mingling with knowing modern diagnosis,
Hesitant about miracles, but coming down on their side in the end,
Perfunctory in scholarship, but showing signs of reasonable background reading,
Narrating, explaining, interpreting, sympathizing, even one might say
Empathizing with his hero, whom he admires, admires,
And more than admires—likes. For he's on Moses' side all right
And keeps him human while demonstrating his greatness….
Whether this ambulatory verse, chatty (almost) pre-film-script narrative
Tells more of the story, or tells it better
Than the Authorized Version of the Bible
Is not perhaps a tactful question to raise.
For Burgess is sorting out his picture of Moses
For himself, a modern self, not making a holy record
For a people, a chosen people, a people made one by this very Moses.
It's not a search for the historical Moses
But a rendering from selected biblical clues
Of those aspects of the biblical story he thinks he can handle.
The rest he omits, or skips over, or compresses
Because he and his verse must move on, move on,
Seeking always "What next?"
The great hymn of triumph after the crossing of the sea
He does not give or render, but puts in odd bits of hymns
At times, to give the proper early religious flavour.
Many readers I think will see something engaging
In this loose and lucid verse history of Moses.
And if I say that for myself, myself, I prefer the Bible,
The account in the Bible from the first Egyptian enslavement
To the death of Moses on Mount Pisgah
(And for that matter the Bible in its original language,
For I too have my linguistic obsessions)
—If I say that, Burgess cannot be offended,
Not offended, because after all he knows the splendours
Of that language as well as any of us
And leavens his own story with it at critical moments.
Interesting, then; commendable, even; a bit of sport
In the garden of modern poetry. But none the worse for that.
David Daiches, "Ambulant Prophet," in The Times Literary Supplement (© Times Newspapers Ltd. (London) 1977; reproduced from The Times Literary Supplement by permission), No. 3906, January 21, 1977, p. 50.
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