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Comparison of themes and structures in Spenser's Amoretti Sonnet 75 and Sonnet 18 with Shakespeare's Sonnet 18

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Spenser's Amoretti Sonnet 75 and Sonnet 18 both explore themes of eternal love and immortality through poetry, similar to Shakespeare's Sonnet 18. While Spenser uses a narrative structure to convey his message, Shakespeare's sonnet employs a more straightforward lyrical form. Both poets ultimately assert that their verses will immortalize the beauty and essence of their beloveds.

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How do the structures of Spenser's Amoretti Sonnet 75 and Shakespeare's Sonnet 18 compare?

Spenser's Amoretti Sonnet 75 is structured with three quatrains (four line stanzas) and a couplet to comprise the fourteen lines of the sonnet form--as prescribed by the original sonneteer, Petrarch--in the Spenserian rhyme scheme ababbcbccdcdee (abab bcbc cdcd ee), with linking of rhyme/thought at concatenated lines bb cc (4-5, 8-9). Starting in the middle of the sonnet, the third quatrain introduces the sonnet paradox: "you shall live by fame; / My verse, [you] ... shall eternize." A paradox is an idea or concept that appears to be false ("baser things devise / To die ... but you shall live"), but is actually a truth of some sort: "My verse, [you] ... shall eternize."

The concluding couplet (two rhyming lines) resolves the conflict between mortal death and immortal life by explaining "Where whenas" all in the world shall in due time die, their love (the sonneteer and the lady with...

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him, Elizabeth Boyle) "shall live" and be read by all through all time in his Sonnets, which will give renewal to all those who read them.

Quatrains one and two are a little trickier to analyze for structure. Spenser innovated a form of sonnet that allows for a logical progression of one subject without the introduction of a paradox. This is different from the Petrarchan form because it and the Shakespearean form have three subjects in all, one in each quatrain. This Petrarchan/Shakespearean form allows for two points of view and a paradox.

In contrast, Spenser's innovation allows for one subject carried through all three quatrains for a logical progression with one point of view and without paradox. The analytical question is: Does 75 represent the logical progression of one subject in the form of a conversation or does it represent two points of view and a paradox before the resolving couplet?

Having defined the question in this way, it seems more clear that Sonnet 75 introduces two points of view and a paradox before the couplet. This means that, structurally, there are two voltas (turns in the subject), one where the points of view change (line 5) ("Vain man, said she, that doest in vain assay,") and one where the paradox is introduced (line 9):

Not so, (quod I) let baser things devise
    To die in dust, but you shall live by fame:

This analysis makes this sonnet structure the same as Shakespeare's Sonnet 18: fourteen lines; three quatrains; two voltas, lines 5 and 9; one paradox, quatrain 3; and one paradoxical resolving couplet, except for Shakespeare's unconcatenated (un-linked) rhyme scheme of ababcdcdefefgg (abab cdcd efef gg):

So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this and this gives life to thee.
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Compare and contrast the themes and structures of Spenser's Amoretti Sonnet 18 and Shakespeare's Sonnet 18.

Spenser and Shakespeare both speak of love in their sonnets. They differ however in that Spenser's Amoretti sonnets were written for a woman who would not return his love until much time had past while Shakespeare wrote for loves who were won, though sometimes they had quarrels or obstacles. Spenser's chronicle unrequited love that finally has a triumphant ending while Shakespeare's chronicle moments in various requited (returned) loves.

In Spenser's Amoretti Sonnet 18, the theme is the hard heart of Spenser's beloved who loves him not and will not let his "long intreaty soften her hard hart." In Shakespeare's Sonnet 18, the theme is a comparison. The beauty of nature that fades under "Rough winds [that] shake the ... buds of May" and the sun's heat, that "too hot the eye of heaven shines" is compared to the beloved's beauty that, in opposition to nature's beauty, will not fade ("But thy eternal summer shall not fade") but instead will "in eternal lines to time" grow in beauty.

The structure of the sonnet was originated with the Latin poet Petrarch who structured sonnets as 14 lines comprised of an octave (8 lines) followed by a sestet (6 lines), with no end couplet. The Petrarchan rhyme scheme is abbaabba cdccdc, with concatenation in each part: aa cc. English poets varied this by changing the octave and sestet to three quatrains (4 lines each), producing 12 lines, and adding a rhyming couplet (2 lines) for the 13th and 14th lines. The standard rhyme scheme is abab cdcd efef gg, with distinct rhyme separations between each quatrain and the couplet thus eliminating concatenation. Shakespeare was not the originator of this English sonnet structure but is certainly the poet who immortalized it; the English structure is variously called the English sonnet or the Shakespearean sonnet.

Spenser developed a variation on the Petrarchan sonnet called the Spenserian sonnet. Spenser accomplished two thing with his sonnet structure: He (1) devised an interlocking rhyme scheme through which he (2) could develop either logical flow or opposition in the sonnet story. The Spenserian rhyme scheme is three quatrains and a rhyming couplet in ababbcbccdcd ee. The repetition of bb in the first portion and cc in the second links the rhymes together: the b rhyme carries from the first to the second quatrain through a repetition at the 4th and 5th lines while the c carries over from the second to the third quatrain through a repetition at the 8th and 9th lines.

This Spenserian/Petrarchan linking, or chaining, in the rhyme is called concatenation, built from the Latin root catena, which means chain. Just as the rhyme links, Spenser's stories can link (be chained together) through logical progression or they can logically oppose each other in thought. Sonnet 18 has logical opposition: It starts with the "rolling wheel" that can "teare" the "hardest steele," then progresses to the failure of his tears to affect the "hard hart" of his love who "turnes hir selfe to laughter" at his persistence. The steel is worn down by the rock in opposition to the "steele and flint" of her heart that "doth still remayne."

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