This poem should be read in the meditative tradition of John Donne and George Herbert, which uses startling or paradoxical first lines, plain images, and ordinary events to make philosophical statements guided by a clear vision of humanity, nature, and time which yield the poet’s vision of his proper place in the universe. Thoreau’s reputation as a poet has been slow in developing because many critics and readers think his prose is far more poetic than this poetry. Thoreau’s poem “I am a parcel of vain strivings tied” clearly was not dashed off hurriedly but is the product of a poet who worked to achieve a synthesis of form and content.
As a shaped poem, this work illustrates the craftsmanship of Thoreau’s poetic output. By establishing a concrete image, developing the metaphor, and then considering its meaning, the poem’s impact is made profound. The transcendent qualities of life are fragile but are “alive” when one sees that one is not “plucked for nought” but instead is guided by the purposes of a “kind hand.” Just what those forces of life are is not established by the poem. Thoreau’s other work is needed to flesh out just what those forces might be.
The structure of this poem is impressive, if playful. The combination of stanza shape and rhyme scheme demonstrates Thoreau’s care and mastery as a poet even if the poem occasionally seems unclear or static. It is a poem intended to grow more clear and dynamic...
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