If you were writing a book about vampires and you wanted to hint more to the reader (or character) that someone was a vampire, how would you do it? I need some ideas because I don't have a clue.

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I think that I would write about the vampires eyes. Vampires always have eyes that are different. Perhaps they could be very dark (even black) or maybe tinted a bit red. Another very common trait that vampires have is the color of their skin. They are usually paler than most...

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I think that I would write about the vampires eyes. Vampires always have eyes that are different. Perhaps they could be very dark (even black) or maybe tinted a bit red. Another very common trait that vampires have is the color of their skin. They are usually paler than most others and cannot go out during the day.

If you want to be less obvious you could go for knowledge. If you think about it, most vampires are very old. They have lived a very long time and have acquired a great deal of knowledge, although they probably appear to be very young. It would be odd for a person, say in their mid twenties, to have a wealth of knowledge that would be almost impossible for a normal person to have acquired. This may give the reader a hint that there is something different about this person.

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