Would like help from teacher to improve my skills in essay writing.Hello, As part of my studies, I have to write essays, on both British and American various works. However, I am a complete...

Would like help from teacher to improve my skills in essay writing.


As part of my studies, I have to write essays, on both British and American various works.

However, I am a complete beginner in essay writing, and I must admit that my skills are not so good.

In order to improve, I'd like to know if anyone would be kind enough to agree reading through my essays, and making comments and advices.

I am doing distance studies with an university in France, but I unfortunately don't get much chance to speak with the teachers, and I am afraid that, like last year, this will not enable me to be the most prepared for my exams.

Biritsh literature works are: Hamlet, Robinson Crusoe, and the Master of Ballantrae

I wait for your anwers. Thanks.



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marilynn07 | High School Teacher | (Level 3) Associate Educator

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When writing an essay on a particular work of literature, it is important to have read the piece at least two times to be familar with it.

You will either have to pick a topic on which to write, or you will be given a topic by your instructor.  It is important that you re-form your topic into a question that needs to be answered by the essay. Break the topic down into 3 basic ideas that will answer the question.  Then search for support through literary analysis articles.

Take a position on your particular topic and use the original work of literature and various scholarly articles to support your assertions.  Be sure to follow all essay format guidelines (MLA, APA, etc).  Be sure that you answer the question posed by your topic.

Write a strong introduction stating your topic and 3 or 4 details that you will cover in the body of the essay.  Each paragraph of the essay should reflect back to the introduction.  Is the detail mentioned in the introduction?  Yes, continue, No, decide if you need to rewrite the introduction or eliminate this detail.

Finally, Write a strong conclusion that leaves the reader with the most important assertion that you made in the body of the paper.  Again, refer back to your original topic and the question that you created. Does your conclusion answer that question?

Cite your references in a bibliography or works cited page.

There are several examples of essay writing available on the Internet. Please see the links below.

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brenton | High School Teacher | (Level 1) eNoter

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You can find many results in google . Here ia some tips for improving your writing skill.Try to organize your thoughts and use a conversational style when you are writing. Have a main idea and then make your backup points to go along with it, add much detail. Write about what you know and the rest will follow. Enjoy writing and realize it is about your life and your interests, make your essay into that and it will be great. Do not think of it as a chore, but as fun, because it is since you get to express yourself. Have a new paragraph for each time the subject changes. Have several sentences per paragraph. Read more and your writing will improve. Also keep a journal and write a lot. That will help a lot.