What is a good thesis statement for this story about the theme if my big ideas are Hatred and Holding a grudge. my original thesis was life is too short to spend hating others, but it doesnt seem...

What is a good thesis statement for this story about the theme if my big ideas are Hatred and Holding a grudge.

my original thesis was life is too short to spend hating others, but it doesnt seem very developed

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jacketmango | (Level 1) eNoter

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You could say the impact on (insertnamehere) as he/she keeps on hating/holding a grudge on someone else. I believe a thesis statement for this could be "hate would destroy you". This thesis statement could be on the impact on the mind, the body, relationships, future etc.