What is a good thesis statement for this story about the theme if my big ideas are Hatred and Holding a grudge.
my original thesis was life is too short to spend hating others, but it doesnt seem very developed
You could say the impact on (insertnamehere) as he/she keeps on hating/holding a grudge on someone else. I believe a thesis statement for this could be "hate would destroy you". This thesis statement could be on the impact on the mind, the body, relationships, future etc.