O. Henry's subtle foreshadowing of Jimmy's re-involvement in safe cracking and the circumstances surrounding it occurs when he first sees Annabel Adams and asks about her. Then, the hints of Jimmy's potential arrest by Ben Price occur when the reports of recent, sophisticated safe-burglary are "high enough" to be brought to the attention of this detective whose collar-button was still in the old room of Valentine after his return from prison.
- Foreshadowing of safe-cracking
When Jimmy Valentine first arrives in Elmore, and a young lady crosses the street, he is smitten. He asks a boy subtly who she is and he tells Jimmy "She's Annabel Adams. Her pa owns this bank."
- Foreshadowing of Jimmy's imminent arrest
After Jimmy changes his path in life because he is madly in love with Annabel, he writes to an old friend, offering him his "kit of tools." Shortly after he writes this letter, "Ben Price jogged unobtrusively into Elmore in a livery buggy." Detective Price is there to observe the happenings in this town after having traced Valentine to this town because of the new safe in the local bank.