To be able to express the point of the poem "Because I could not stop for Death" by Emily Dickenson in a conclusive statement, it is first necessary to understand what the poet is saying. In this poem, the narrator is describing her own death and journey to the afterlife. In stating that she "could not stop" living life, she is indicating the human condition. None of us has a predetermined moment when we give up, stop living, and voluntarily die. For most of us, it comes as a surprise. We continue to live our lives until death takes us.
The traditional view of death is as a dark, frightening, skeleton-like figure. However, in this poem, Death is personified as a "kindly" man with "civility" who invites the narrator for a ride in his carriage drawn by horses. Death is accompanied by immortality, which would be comforting to the narrator. Death, the driver, goes "slowly," knowing "no haste," and so on the way the narrator is able to observe a school where children play, a field of grain, and the sunset.
The narrator discovers she is wearing a gossamer gown and a tippet of tulle. A gown of gossamer would be made of light, delicate material. A tippet is a scarf or veil, and tulle is a type of sheer material like silk. We see that her apparel has become thin and ghostlike.
The narrator and Death pause before a house that resembles "a swelling of the ground." Most of it is hidden. This seems to be a description of the narrator's grave. She then says that centuries have passed but it seems like a short amount of time, because Death led her to eternity.
An important point to remember about this poem is that the narrator never even hints at any fear of death. Instead, she describes death as being kind and civil, and her journey leads to immortality and eternity. With this in mind, you could come up with a conclusive statement about the poem that would indicate what you think the poem is trying to say. For instance, you might write: "Death is a positive experience that leads us to eternity." Or: "Death is nothing to fear, because it takes us to an immortal state of existence."