What are the advantages and disadvantages of the author's choice of narrator?

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The author uses third-person omniscient narration, which means the narrator hovers "godlike" over the story, knowing all that is going on. He is able to give us background information and can flit in and out of different people's heads. We see this in action in the opening of the novel:

He was an old man who fished alone in a skiff in the Gulf Stream and he had gone eighty-four days now without taking a fish. In the first forty days a boy had been with him. But after forty days without a fish the boy’s parents had told him that the old man was now definitely and finally salao, which is the worst form of unlucky, and the boy had gone at their orders in another boat which caught three good fish the first week. It made the boy sad to see the old man come in each day with his skiff empty . . . .

As we understand, the narrator gives us background: we learn directly and simply that the old man has not caught a fish in 84 days. Hemingway doesn't have to contrive dialogue, for example, to communicate this to us. We also move quickly to what the boy's parents have to say, and then into the emotions of the boy (sad).

The great advantage of third-person, omniscient narration is flexibility. There are no limits on what the reader can be told, because the narrator has no limits on his ability to know what is going on. Hemingway, nevertheless, tells most of the story from the old man, Santiago's, point of view, describing what is happening to him as he perceives it and letting us know his thoughts.

Hemingway uses a very spare, simple style of narration. This makes the story easy to follow and conveys a sense of Santiago's Christlike purity of heart. The simple narration supports a simple, straightforward story: Hemingway doesn't have to tie himself in knots to communicate information: he can simply directly tell us what he wants us to know.

A disadvantage to third-person narration is the distance it can put between the reader and the action. If we think of different types of narration as different ways of filming a scene, first person means the camera is always on the narrator's shoulder, so we always see everything up close and personal. In third person, the camera is everywhere: we can get long shots and panoramic vistas, which can be nice, but such shots also lack immediacy.

Primarily, Hemingway's narration in this novel works very much to his advantage. It's a case of form fitting function.

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There is third person omniscient and third person limited point of view. In omniscient, the reader has access to many points of view from many characters. The reader can gain knowledge of many things that one character could not possibly know. The third person limited is where the reader follows one character around. The advantage is that the narrator might be more observant and the reader can 'see' more however, they are limited as to what one character can see or experience. Another advantage of third person limited is that the reader can have more objectivity and what they see is filtered through one character. However a disadvantage would be that the reader is distanced from the emotional life of the character.

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This story is told in the third person omniscient point of view. The narrator is not a character in the story, but he is an objective observer who tells the reader the thoughts and feelings of most or all of the characters in the story.

The advantages of this kind of narration is that it provides a wider perspective from which the thoughts of the old man and the other characters can be presented. At the beginning, we not only know what Santiago is thinking, but what the other fishermen think of the old man. The third person narrator is usually a more reliable narrator than first person since the reader knows the other characters from the narrator's perspective only.

One disadvantage of the third person point of view is that the reader isn't able to make as personal a connection with the narrator as he/she can if the narrator is first person. Since a character in the story tells it in the first person point of view, the reader gets to know that character well, providing the opportunity to empathize with him/her more. First person can also make for a better story sometimes if the reader doesn't know what the other characters are thinking. Edgar Allan Poe, for example, chose such interesting narrators for his stories. Reading "The Cask of Amontillado" or "The Tell-Tale Heart" from the narrator's point of view helped to create the eerie atmosphere needed for his gothic literature.

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