This sentence is a sentence fragment; please correct it. When, in 1832, her parents could no longer tolerate the social and political situation in Bristol, England. They immigrated with their eight children to New York.

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When you look at a sentence to see if it is a fragment or not, you need to look at how it is connected to the other part of the sentence or even if there is any connection at all.  The word when creates a subordinating clause to the main sentence "they immigrated with their eight children to New York."  Therefore, the way to correct this sentence fragment is to  connect it correctly to the main sentence by using a comma.  Now it will be correct when you change it to: "When, in 1932, her parents could no longer tolerate the social and political situation in Bristol, England, they immigrated with their eight children to New York."  

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