Regarding the short story Thank You, M'am, Roger and Mrs. Jones meet 10 years later. Write their conversation.   I wrote it. Please fix my mistakes and check the grammar and see if it needs any...

Regarding the short story Thank You, M'am, Roger and Mrs. Jones meet 10 years later. Write their conversation. 

 

I wrote it. Please fix my mistakes and check the grammar and see if it needs any new ideas.

Roger:  Oh my god you're Mrs. Jones! It’s been so long to see you, how are you and how are your life?

 

Mrs. Jones: oh roger my dear I’m fine, it’s been so long to see you too. I’m an old woman now without job or anything to do just still at my house.

 

Roger: oh M’am, do you remember that day when I tried to snatch your purse? By the way I’m sorry again about that.

 

Mrs. Jones: oh yeah, I just remember that day! it’s ok my dear.

 

Roger: that day… is just change my whole life and I learned a lot from that day!

 

Mrs. Jones: I’m really happy that you learned these things and I depend to treat you that way to learn you the right from wrong and you got it.

 

Roger: thank you M’am about everything and I really appreciate you and I will never forget you and the way you treated me!

 

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Roger: "Oh my God! You're Mrs. Jones! It's been so long since I've seen you. How are you, and how is your life?"
Mrs. Jones: "Oh, Roger, my dear! I'm fine. It's been so long since I've seen you, too. I'm an old woman now without a job or anything to do, but I'm still at my home."
Roger:  "Oh, M'am, do you remember that day when I tried to snatch your purse? By the way, I'm sorry again about that."
Mrs. Jones:  Oh, yeah. I remember that day. It's OK, my dear."
Roger:  "That day... it just changed my whole life, and I learned a lot from you that day."
Mrs. Jones:  "I'm really happy that you learned these things, and I treated you that way so you would learn right from wrong, and you got it."
Roger:  "Thank you, M'am, and I appreciate you, and I will never forget you and the way you treated me!"



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Roger:"Oh my God! You're Mrs.Jones! It's been so long since I have seen you. How are you and how is your life? "

Mrs.Jones:"Oh,Roger ! Is this is really you! I can't believe my eyes! It been so long since I've seen you, too. I'm an old woman now without a job or anything to do, but I'm still at my empty home. All I have is the good memories"

Roger:"Yeah, but you still remember me that means you still have that image of me trying to snatch your purse! So I also made you remember this one bad memory! I'm so sorry!"

Mrs.Jones:"Oh! Don't be sorry my dear. Back then you were a kid, and no one was there for you! No one teached you right from wrong . So I don't blame you at all, also I'm sure that you've learned your lesson and that's what really matters!"

Roger:"Thanks you, m'am ! I promise you that I'm going to be a kind generous person like you! "

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