Please give me suggestions about how to improve this analysis.  The main concept demonstrated throughout this episode is how relationships and facing emotional issues can contribute to obesity and...

Please give me suggestions about how to improve this analysis. 

The main concept demonstrated throughout this episode is how relationships and facing emotional issues can contribute to obesity and how society’s perception on people gaining weight is really shallow which causes them to not look at the real problem. Dick’s and Tommy’s struggles are something many viewers can relate to and it is also entertaining at most times. 3rd Rock from the Sun is a fantastic oddball sitcom and it its greatly recommended for adults and teen who want a good laugh but also possibly learn something new about humans. It’s a comedy mixed with a touch of sci-fi. 

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I think that there is much in way of strong thought in this section of the essay.  I believe that the first sentence needs to be broken up a bit.  A topic sentence to an essay like this should be rather precise and driven.  I feel that the first sentence contains several thoughts within it that might be better set if they are shown to be independent thoughts.  For example, try "The...

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