Please give me suggestions about how to improve this essay. After Dick and Dr. Albright’s relationship came to an end, Dick’s eating habits changed and he started eating a lot. After Dick’s...

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After Dick and Dr. Albright’s relationship came to an end, Dick’s eating habits changed and he started eating a lot. After Dick’s bemusement to why he has gained so much weight, he began dieting, exercising and attending support groups until he realizes that he has been, “ Filling an emotion void with food” to compensate missing Marry. Sally has got a tomato plant from Mrs. Dubcet and starts talking to it and even give it a name. Tommy thinks that August might be cheating on him so he hires a crime novel buff Harry to be his private eye.  The show mostly focuses on Dick and Tommy as they both encounter relationship problems that they attempt to resolve with food. Humour for entertainment means was also portrayed throughout the show as problems find solutions. 

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I think that this serves as a solid summary of the episode.  Perhaps, a some better use of word choice might assist.  "Bemusement" does not seem to accurately capture where the sentence wishes to go, in my opinion.  At the same time, I think that more detail is needed on the idea of "filling an emotion [sic] void with food" has to be explained.  An explanation might be...

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