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Lord of the Flies

by William Golding
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What are the major turning points (including the inciting incident) in Lord of the Flies?

The inciting incident of Lord of the Flies is probably either when the boys realize they are alone on the island, or when Ralph is elected chief. Other possible turning points include Jack's promise not to hesitate again, Simon's discovery of evil within himself and others, and Simon's death. Exercise: What are the major turning points (including inciting incidents) in your short story or novel? Think about these turning points/inciting incidents as if you were trying to sell your story to a movie production company. What would you say about each one in a pitch meeting? If you've never written out individual summaries for each one of your turning points before, give it a try.

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A story's inciting incident is the point in the plot that sets up the protagonist to pursue some kind of mission or goal. It essentially starts the action of a story or introduces the initial conflict.

With that in mind, the inciting incident of Lord of the Flies could be...

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A story's inciting incident is the point in the plot that sets up the protagonist to pursue some kind of mission or goal. It essentially starts the action of a story or introduces the initial conflict.

With that in mind, the inciting incident of Lord of the Flies could be a couple of things depending on how you look at it. I think a strong argument could be made that the inciting incident to this story occurs before the story even begins. The book doesn't begin with the plane crashing. The book begins with the plane having already crashed. If I have to pick an inciting incident from the actual pages of the story, I would have a tough time deciding between two specific moments. The first moment would be the moment that the boys all realize that they are on this island alone without any adults. This would be my choice for the inciting incident if I wanted to consider the main conflict as a man vs. nature conflict. The second moment for a possible inciting incident is the moment when Ralph is elected as chief. This absolutely doesn't sit well with Jack, and their animosity toward each other begins to slowly grow from this moment. This would be my inciting incident if I was making a case for a man vs. man main conflict. I might consider that Ralph's election is a better turning point than inciting incident since that moment does cause a power struggle to begin festering that escalates to full blown murderous violence. Other turning points could be when Jack swears he will never hesitate on a kill again, when Simon discovers that the evil is within each of the boys, and when Simon dies.

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One could argue that the first inciting incident in the story is the moment that the boys realize that they have crash-landed on an uninhabited island with no adults to take charge and elect Ralph as their chief. The boys realize that they must fend for themselves and attempt to establish a civil, organized society.

One of the first turning points in the novel takes place in chapter 4, when Jack allows his hunters to neglect the signal fire. The hunters also paint their faces and successfully kill their first pig. After Jack and his hunters kill their first pig, the boys rapidly descend into savagery and develop an affinity for blood. They feel unrestrained and begin acting like barbarians behind their painted masks.

Another inciting incident takes place in chapter 7, when Ralph, Jack, and Roger believe they see the beast on the top of the mountain. They are not aware that they have discovered the corpse of a dead paratrooper, and they become overwhelmed with fear. Their fear leads to the unfortunate, tragic death of Simon in chapter 9. Simon's brutal death in chapter 9 is another turning point in the novel and is the moment when they abandon all hope of establishing a civil society.

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The inciting incident of this story happens immediately, if not before the story. An inciting incident will introduce the problem that the novel or story tries to overcome or solve. In this case, the moment of the crash which leaves the boys stranded on a deserted island would be the inciting incident. This moment actually happens before the book occurs. If you need to have something within the text, I would argue that the moment the boys realize they are without adults should be the next best event to call the inciting incident.

A first turning point in the novel occurs when Jack breaks from the rest of the boys. In this moment, it seems as if it is possible that death is closer than a solution to their problem of being stranded. This occurs in chapter 7.

A next turning point occurs when Simon dies in chapter 9 trying to tell the boys that the Beast is not real, but is the evil that is a part of all of them. It seems as if they will never understand the evil that is beginning to rule them.

When Piggy dies in the next chapters, all hope seems lost. This is the last turning point that could be considered the climax because at that point, it seems like the boys will never recover from what savagery has done to them. This savagery relates to the inciting incident because the absence of parents to control behavior led to these terrible acts.

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