philippine political corruptionwhat is the best thesis statement for this topic ?

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litteacher8 | High School Teacher | (Level 3) Distinguished Educator

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I suggest you find some examples of Philippine political corruption and see how you can categorize them. Then you can develop a thesis based on those commonalities in order to write an essay on political corruption. Work backward, and you have your examples too.
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pohnpei397 | College Teacher | (Level 3) Distinguished Educator

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There are a number of thesis statements that you could use for this topic, depending on what your interests are.  For example:

  • You could try to talk about the causes of corruption.  You could say something like "Political corruption will continue in the Philippines as long as public servants' pay is low."  Or you could argue that "Political corruption in the Philippines happens because the political parties have no ideological stances and are bound together only by personal ties."
  • You could talk about whether Pres. Aquino's efforts to end corruption will work.  You could say something like "Pres. Aquino's efforts to end corruption will never succeed because Filipino society does not strongly disapprove of corruption."
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regalbaker | Student, College Freshman | eNotes Newbie

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 can someone give me two body statement for this topic..

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