The paragraph below needs to be made more coherent. Use repetition, synonyms, and pronouns to link the sentences.Many cities are easily distinguished by their skylines. In such cities--New York...

The paragraph below needs to be made more coherent. Use repetition, synonyms, and pronouns to link the sentences.

Many cities are easily distinguished by their skylines. In such cities--New York and Paris, for example--certain buildings are so distinctive that the buildings have come to represent New York and Paris. Just a glance at the skyline's profile tells the viewer of the profile what city is pictured.

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Many cities are easily distinguished by their skylines.  In New York, certain buildings are so distinctive that they have come to represent the city.  The same is true with Paris.  Just a glance at the skyline of Paris tells the viewer what city is pictured.

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