No less than fifty men were injured in the accident I do not like such movies, which are immoral Poultry has given him great profitPlease correct the above 3 questions.

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William Delaney | (Level 3) Distinguished Educator

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No fewer than fifty men were injured in the accident.

At least fifty men were injured in the accident. (I think this is better.)

I do not like such immoral movies.

I do not like such movies, because they are immoral.

Dealing in poultry has earned him great profits.

He has earned great profits through dealing in poultry. (Better)

I think the last sentence would be improved by using the active voice rather than the passive voice. You should, of course, have a period at the end of each of your sentences, but I haven't edited the sentences in your question because the absence of periods might have been intentional. Some of your questions have problems with syntax. The first sentence contains a common grammatical mistake, i.e., "less" instead of "fewer."

 

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