I need help with my Martin Luther King junior paragraph about politics in the 1960s. I need more information to include in my paragraph.I need like something good that talks about this man so that...

I need help with my Martin Luther King junior paragraph about politics in the 1960s. I need more information to include in my paragraph.I need like something good that talks about this man so that i can finish my paragraph thanks and can you please list the source or website to see where you got the info from.

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First of all, if I were your teacher I would be very suspicious of the answer that you have given so far.  The style of the writing, particularly in the second picture, is not that of a typical high school student.  For example, when you say "acted in concert with" it makes me think you are copying something that you have seen somewhere.  I am, of course, not your teacher, but I would be very unhappy with this answer.  I suggest you rewrite it unless you are sure that this sounds like your own work.

As for what else you could say about the man, it depends on what you think you are supposed to say about him.  I would talk about his career as a civil rights leader.  I would mention the Montgomery Bus Boycott unless you are not allowed to do that since it happened in 1957 and 1958.  I would talk about his role in integrating lunch counters through sit-ins.  I would talk about his philosophy of non-violence.  I would talk about the march from Selma to Montgomery for voting rights.  I would say that his actions were some of the most important factors that allowed the Civil Rights Act of 1964 and the Voting Rights Act of 1965 to be passed.

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