I need help starting a commentary summary on topic of Alcohol and advertisment toward youth I am stuck! this is for my introduction to sociology class

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The first step you should take is to form a strong thesis statement for the introduction of your paper.  Your thesis statement should include: 1) an assertion about alcolhol and advertisement toward youth and 2) three subpoints that support or explain your position. 


Cause and effect--  Increased youth alcohol abuse has been increased by advertisement.  Create three subpoints that show various ways advertising targets the youthful audience. 

Relation--  Create a strong thesis in which you assert that alcolhol advertisements target youth; your subpoints could be various examples of advertising that target youthful audiences. Then in your body paragraphs you could further analyse the advertising.



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