You have a lot of run on sentences. Remember, one subject and one verb. Try this:
I travelled to Hadramoot two years ago. The journey was very amazing and full of nice memories. Ww went on many trips. I remember the trip when we went to a swimming pool. My family and I got up at 6:00 am. We drank water and made breakfast. Then we went there.
You also repeat information. You have a lot of detail, but in the wrong places. What did you make for breakfast? Who were the other peope with you? Why did you go there? You will make it more interesting with detail in the right places.