I would suggest you try to give some more concrete examples of past experiences that support your choice of EECS. What was a specific activity you enjoyed while exploring the world of electronic devices and why did you like it? What is a particular experience or program you have written in a programming language that makes you proud? Why are you proud of it? Instead of listing different labs that might be available for use in formulating new theories and inventions, narrow down your focus. Pick one area and outline how you might use the facilities of that particular lab to advance an idea or research a question that interests you. I'm not sure what your last sentence means, but I think you're trying to be clever and complimentary. You'd be better off using that part of your 100 word limit to make your abilities shine, not to sweet-talk MIT.