In "The Landlady," how does Roald Dahl manage to hold the reader's interest throughout the story?

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After a certain point in the story Roald Dahl holds the reader's interest with foreshadowing. But in the early part he holds the reader's interest just by describing a scene of perfect simplicity and and tranquility. What could be more safe and innocent than a homey  bed-and-breakfast establishment in a stodgy town like Bath? The landlady is a typical sweet little old lady who keeps everything neat and tidy and likes to chat with her guests.

The reader, of course, senses that there must be something sinister about such a place and such a landlady. We are suspicious just because she seems so completely innocent. And this isn't only because we know what to expect from Roald Dahl; it would be the same if any other author had written the story. It is not unusual for a horror story to start off with a sentence such as: "It was a beautiful, sunny summer day and the birds were singing in the trees." Here, for example, is the opening of Shirley Jackson's shocking horror story "The Lottery":

The morning of June 27th was clear and sunny, with the fresh warmth of a full-summer day; the flowers were blossoming profusely and the grass was richly green.

Here, by comparison, is the opening sentence of "The Landlady":

Billy Weaver had traveled down from London on the slow afternoon train, with a change at Reading on the way, and by the time he got to Bath, it was about nine o'clock in the evening, and the moon was coming up out of a clear stary sky over the houses opposite the station entrance.

This absence of foreshadowing is a kind of foreshadowing. We know something has got to happen.

After Billy signs the guest-book, the real foreshadowing begins. He notices the names of the two former guests and thinks he has heard them but...

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