Imagine you had a remarkable train journey, detected a bomb, rescued the passengers and in the confusion lost your luggage. write an essay on it..Imagine you had a remarkable train journey,...

Imagine you had a remarkable train journey, detected a bomb, rescued the passengers and in the confusion lost your luggage. write an essay on it..

Imagine you had a remarkable train journey, detected a bomb, rescued the passengers and in the confusion lost your luggage. write an essay on it..

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litteacher8 | High School Teacher | (Level 3) Distinguished Educator

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Sounds fun. If this is an essay and not a story, you might want to take a more objective, journalistic point of view. Describe each event matter of factly and chronologically. Pretend you are writing a report or a newspaper or magazine article.
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stolperia | (Level 1) Educator Emeritus

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Organize your plan for your essay by setting the scene. Where were you going on your train journey? What type of luggage did you have with you for your trip? Where was it stored? Who was riding in the same compartment with you?

Next, create a timeline for the events you want to include in your essay. How did you notice the bomb in your compartment? What was your clue to its presence? What did you do first after noticing it? How did you help the other passengers get to safety? How did you notify the train engineer or other staff members of the danger? What happened next? How did all of you get away from the train? When did you notice your luggage was missing? What did you do when you realized it was gone?

Conclude your essay by explaining how your luggage was recovered (if it is returned) and telling about any reward you might have received for your alert action and bravery on the train!

 

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romabajaj111 | Student, Grade 9 | (Level 3) eNoter

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write an essay on it or a account in detail of your adventure.........

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