How to Write a strong thesis?
3 jobs. Physical Therapist, Personal trainer, Counselor.
Job that best fits me: Counselor.
I need to write a thesis that explains that a counselor is best fitting? Can you help me to fit this together?
Although a Physical Therapist and Personal trainer are both jobs that would lead to a successful future, a counselor would (improve? be? exceed? need another world here... need to say that a counselor would be a better job for me in some way that makes the thesis end strong..)__________
The strength of a thesis statement is not just in the statement itself but the entire paper. In order for you thesis statement to be strong, it has to be a provable, supportable statement. You want it to be broad enough to expound upon the idea but narrow enough to provide focus.
As far as filling in your statement above, you need to decide what you are tyring to prove. Why do you think being a counselor would be better than the other two? Maybe becoming a counselor would be better because you would be able to make a lasting difference in people's lives. Maybe becoming a counselor would be better because it is the job most suited to you.
Decide what you are going to prove with the rest of your paper before you finish the thesis statement. Once you know what you are writing about, the thesis statement will be much easier to finish.