In "Death, be not proud," by John Donne, identify the sound devices and comment on their contribution towards the subject matter of the poem. Also comment on the stanza formation
The poem is clearly a Petrarchan sonnet since it follows its structure. The poem consists of fourteen lines made up of an octave (verse of eight lines) and a sestet (six lines).
As far as sound devices are concerned, these are used by the poet to emphasize or enhance the impact of what he says. These include rhyme, meter, alliteration, assonance and onomatopoeia.
In this poem, Donne breaks away from the common ABBAABBA and CDECDE pattern normally found in Pertrarchan sonnets. He retains the normal rhyme scheme in the octave but deviates in the sestet, where the rhyme scheme is, in this instance, CDDCAE. It is clear that he has done this deliberately for emphasis. Normally, the octave presents a problem and the sestet presents a resolution. By using a regular rhyme scheme, the poet binds sections and creates unity. This much is evident in the octave. The sestet, however, seems to break up.
'Eternally' in line 13 rhymes with thee, me, be and delivery in the octave. By doing this, Donne connects the sestet to the octave. The purpose is obvious - 'we wake eternally' is emphasized and creates a contrast to Death's supposed finality when he takes the best men. However, the link becomes clear when we learn that Death only delivers men's souls, 'and soul's delivery,' so that they may arise again and enjoy eternal life.
'Die' in the last line of the poem does not rhyme with any other word. This makes it stand out and emphasizes its importance. The speaker says 'Death, thou shalt die,' which seems paradoxical but can be understood since, when there is eternal life, there can be no death.
Another sound device Donne uses is alliteration throughout. This is used for emphasis and is identified by the repetition of consonants in consecutive words in a line. Note, for example, the repetition of the 't' in line three:
For those whom thou think'st thou dost overthrow
It is as if Donne is mouthing a 'tut, tut, tut' for Death's arrogant belief in its power. Poor Death, you are so pitiful in believing that you are so great, but I know of something even greater.
Repetition is also used effectively as it enhances the rhythmic quality of the sestet and also lends emphasis to the speaker's point about how ineffective death actually is:
And dost with poison, war, and sickness dwell,
And poppy or charms can make us sleep as well
And better than thy stroke; why swell'st thou then?
Much pleasure; then from thee much more must flow,
The ABBA rhyme scheme gives Donne's poem a measured tone that serves as something like a respectful yet gleeful triumph over the anthropomorphized "Death."
Death be not proud, though some have called thee
Mighty and dreadfull, for, thou art not so,
For, those, whom thou think'st, thou dost overthrow,
Die not, poore death, nor yet canst thou kill me.
Donne also uses alliteration, first to impart a tone of gravity: "Much pleasure, then from thee, much more must flow." Then, again, to convey a tone of triumph in the final lines: "short sleep" and "wee wake,' and most importantly, the last line, "death, thou shalt die."