Critical OverviewWhat do the critics say about this story? Who is the antagonist? Why? Who is the protagonist? Why?

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Karen P.L. Hardison eNotes educator| Certified Educator

While it is critically viable to say there are two protagonists, I don't see the viability is suggesting that Mrs. Jones is not classed as a protagonist. Protagonist may substitute the word hero, and Mrs. Jones is certainly heroic in character and actions: she sees a crushing problem oppressing what might rightly be described as a hapless victim of fate (socio-economic limitations, restrictions, and prejudice) and delivers him by giving him a new view of and opportunity in life. Hughes certainly casts her as a hero of the ordinary humanity sort that echoes the Romanticism of Wordsworth: she recognizes the humanity of the boy who makes "contact with" her; she attends to and relieves the boy's needs; she recognizes the boy's individuality and dignity; she teaches right from wrong; she bestows forgiveness; she ushers in a new opportunity.

While Roger might not have the characteristics of a hardened antagonist, he violates Mrs. Jones peace, attempts to rob her, commits social and legal wrong. Since we and Mrs.Jones and Hughes have sympathy for and connection with and hope for Roger, it might be best to cast Roger as a second protagonist and caste society as the antagonist, as it is clear from the text and Hughes' tone that Mrs. Jones is the hero, the guiding light, the protagonist of "Thank You, M'am," an analysis even confirmed in the title, which, though spoken by Roger, highlights Mrs. Jones.

vangoghfan eNotes educator| Certified Educator

In one sense the protagonist is Roger and the antagonist is Mrs. Jones.  She, after all, is the one who creates obstacles for him in a variety of ways.

On the other hand, she might be considered the protagonist in the sense that she is the central character -- the one who is most active and who takes most control of the story's plot.

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accessteacher eNotes educator| Certified Educator

I must admit, my first feeeling is that Mrs. Jones is the protagonist of this story. She is the one after all who is stopped by Roger and then tries to "convert" him and give him a moral lesson that will have far-reaching consequences on Roger's life. However, I do think this is a matter of opinion and definitely not a clear cut issue.

pohnpei397 eNotes educator| Certified Educator

I think that you can go a couple of ways here.  I think the best protagonist is Roger.  The reason for that is that he has a clear antagonist.  His antagonist is himself.  He has to fight against his own conscience.  I think that that is the main conflict going on in the story -- it's between Roger and himself.

literaturenerd eNotes educator| Certified Educator

I must agree with pohnpei. The protagonist of the story is Roger. His internal struggle, man verses himself, provides the conflict and, therefore, the antagonist (in this case) would be his conscience. Outside of that, many different positions could be stated, given literature is so subjective.

litteacher8 eNotes educator| Certified Educator

You could argue that the story is an example of a major problem in our society: poverty leads to crime.  The story offers hope.  If the people in poverty look out for each other, and provide strong parental figures for the lost, maybe we can overcome it.

moto303 | Student

So to justify-as much as possible- Rogers actions, would it be relevant to argue "Nature vs. Nurture?"