Comment on Anne Brontë's writing style in The Tenant of Wildfell Hall and whether it is likable or not.
Anne Bronte's writing style has been a matter of some contention since the book was published in 1848. On the one hand, it was a best seller from the start, so her reading public enjoyed her writing style. On the other hand, neither of her sisters, Charlotte nor Emily, liked her style. They also criticized her content partly because she used their brother, Branwell, who had drinking and other problems, as a model for the character of Huntingdon. Bronte's contemporaneous critics generally fell on the side of of the sisters in disliking her style calling it "rough" and, as the critic Winifrith says, "obvious and crude."
One troublesome point of her style is that she creates doubt in a number of places as to whom the first-person narrator is addressing. The first and worst instance is the opening line: "You must go back with me to the autumn of 1827." From this, readers expect they are being directly addressed, yet, we are not. In the very next line, we must adjust our mental image, recognize we are not being addressed and wonder who is being addressed: "My father, as you know, was a sort of gentleman farmer ...." It is not until the fifth paragraph that we learn the narrator is addressing the husband of his sister, Rose.
I need not tell you this was my sister Rose. She is, I know, a comely matron still, and, doubtless, no less lovely—in your eyes—than on the happy day you first beheld her. Nothing told me then that she, a few years hence, would be the wife of one entirely unknown to me as yet,
This may not seem a large inconvenience nor a large flaw in style, but skilled writers make these sorts of elements known, through one subtle means or another, in the first paragraph. Another objection is...
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kplhardison cites an incomplete version of the novel. Original opening line of The Tenant of Wildfell Hall is this: To J. Halford, Esq. Dear Halford, When we were together last, you gave me a very particular and interesting account of the most remarkable occurrences of your early life, previous to our acquaintance; and then you requested a return of confidence from me.
As you see, The Tenant is an epistolary novel. It's written in a form of letter from Gilbert Markham to his friend Jack Halford.
Incomplete editions with damaged stucture appeared when one publisher after Anne's death dicided to issue a shortened edition of The Tenant in the interest of economy. Unfortunately, incomplete editions are still prevalent today.