In "And of Clay We Are Created," what are the strong diction choices that help to clearly create a tone?

Expert Answers

An illustration of the letter 'A' in a speech bubbles

Isabel Allende’s word choice, or diction, in the first paragraph of “And of Clay We Are Created” immediately sets the tone of despair and destruction for the short story.

In that vast cemetery where the odor of death was already attracting vultures from far away, and where the weeping of orphans and wails of the injured filled the air, the little girl obstinately clinging to life became the symbol of the tragedy.

Words that contribute to the tone of despair and tragedy create imagery by appealing to the reader’s senses. Allende describes the setting of the story as a “vast cemetery,” alluding to sadness, death, and a final resting place. The reader can smell death, hear the crying children, and see the little girl, partially buried alive, but clinging to life.

Later Allende writes, “First a subterranean sob rocked he cotton fields.” Again, using the word “sob,” she personifies the inner workings of the volcano until, with its eruption, “a prolonged roar announced the end of the world.” This diction supports the tone of misery, death, and destruction. In her final description of the aftermath of the volcanic eruption, she uses the word “cataclysm” to once again emphasize the destruction associated with the natural disaster. This tone is pervasive throughout the story. Just when the reader feels there may be hope, disaster strikes again in a different form.

Approved by eNotes Editorial Team
Soaring plane image

We’ll help your grades soar

Start your 48-hour free trial and unlock all the summaries, Q&A, and analyses you need to get better grades now.

  • 30,000+ book summaries
  • 20% study tools discount
  • Ad-free content
  • PDF downloads
  • 300,000+ answers
  • 5-star customer support
Start your 48-Hour Free Trial