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Can you please give me suggestions about how to improve this TV sitcom review? Introduction:  From break ups to dealing with emotional voids, 3rd Rock from the Sundepicts an outlook... [removed by...

Can you please give me suggestions about how to improve this TV sitcom review?

Introduction: 

From break ups to dealing with emotional voids, 3rd Rock from the Sun depicts an outlook... [removed by Staff to avoid Internet plagiarism].

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First of all, you seem to be combining a review with an analysis. A review is 400-600 words that explains why someone should or should not see a film or a show. It includes identifying the film/show; a summary of the story; describing actors/acting, directing and one technical element; your opinion about whether or not it is worth spending money/time on. An analysis is an in-depth examination of the elements and techniques, including theme, social commentary, and directorial vision, that comprise the film/show.

Whichever one you mean to be writing, your Introduction does a good job identifying the program and episode (show titles are written in italics; episode titles are placed in quotation marks). Some sentences have clumsy wording though, for example, this one:

From break ups to dealing with emotional voids, 3rd Rock from the Sun depicts an outlook regarding society’s views and relationship breakdowns which are made evident in the episode Moby Dick.

Your difficulty seems to lie here, "depicts an...

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