Can you pleae give me suggestions about how to improve the concluding paragraph of this TV sitcom review?  Conclusion:  The main concept demonstrated throughout this episode is how relationships...

Can you pleae give me suggestions about how to improve the concluding paragraph of this TV sitcom review? 

Conclusion: 

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The content of this conclusion is, for the most part, quite good.  The one thing I would change in terms of content is the last sentence.  This sentence does not sum up what you have said.  It feels like an add-on that has no real point.  It would make more sense with the rest of your...

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